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I have 2015 stories published in 16 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 4106122 times and 623 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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A tooth's tale!

18, and front teeth capped, filed to points and wrapped …in lockdown, the ‘full crown’ came loose One dentist had retired and appointments were scarce … get mixed with my sandwich …? …

Packing

As you move on into this journey, future, this new year, abandon … acquire …

The King of kings defeats King Herod’s plan

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] God worked his purpose, saved despite King Herod’s evil scheme. He sent to Joseph to take flight – preserve...

Toddler opening presents

When you are one it’s really fun to tear off the paper to find what’s inside there. … And then that bag they put the wrapping paper in …
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Why didn’t I really like it?

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/A_Girl_with_a_Watering_Can A copy of this was given by an aunt when I was quite young. She was loving and kindly but...

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1468 of my comments have received 1510 Great Feedback votes

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Don't need the wood for

Posted on Wed, 15 Apr 2015

Don't need the wood for knocking on, but those birds being fed sure need them for bugs and nests!
Just changed the last verse since last night? I think I hadn't picked up the relevant point of the woods by the old bungalow being removed for...

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Posted in An Everyday Story of Country Folk

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You've caught such a lot in

Posted on Wed, 15 Apr 2015

You've caught such a lot in that little verse. Delightful! Though troubles come to the trusting one, they are kept through it by his power, and his blood has won the victory! Rhiannon

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Posted in No Worries With Jesus

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That third verse is

Posted on Fri, 10 Apr 2015

That third verse is especially lovely, and captures that view. All birds of prey seem so elegant, especially the kite. Is the pic a kite, I thought their tails were always more, or less, forked? I know I'm sometimes puzzled at the 'less forked'...

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Posted in A First Foraging

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I thought it was a dog, but

Posted on Mon, 30 Mar 2015

I thought it was a dog, but it seemed to be a cat! Liked the digging and the perfume. But wasn't sure about the 'his' in the last line - is it the husband having nine lives or should it be 'your' referring to the cat? Maybe I'm totally wrong, if...

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Posted in The Prodigal

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What a lovely little inciden

Posted on Fri, 27 Mar 2015

What a lovely little inciden capturedt! Was it a green woodpecker? I gather they do hammer sometime but my husband used to tell me, if it's the hammering you hear, then it's the greater spotted. He keeps having to turn my attention to it anyway,...

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Posted in Spotted at Dawn

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It's lovely what you took in

Posted on Sat, 07 Mar 2015

It's lovely what you took in in your micro-glance, refreshing you for the rest of your journey. Rhiannon

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Posted in The A1 Crosses the River Swale

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 A lot to think about there,

Posted on Sat, 21 Feb 2015

 A lot to think about there, and well written of course. How difficult to live with great skill, humbly and kindly. Rhiannon

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Posted in "All the World's a Stage"

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I can only say, how

Posted on Mon, 09 Feb 2015

I can only say, how compassionate and caring the staff are where my father-in-law is. (and it is just a basic nursing home, largely council funded, they have recently introduced a very minimal top-up and of course there is always means testing)....

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Posted in Room Six - Tooting Bec Asylum...1982

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I really liked the way you

Posted on Tue, 03 Feb 2015

I really liked the way you slipped in the descriptions of the garden eg ' the smell of pine as refreshing as a bucket of snow, needles crunching underfoot.' That whole paragraph seems to have so much vivid description just tucked in...

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Posted in uncorrected proof two.

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Horrible, Bee. Getting

Posted on Wed, 28 Jan 2015

Horrible, Bee. Getting callous like this to animal suffering, must so easily lead to callousness to human suffering too. Rhiannon

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Posted in Giving Them a VOICE

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