No working title?
Here is a story that I'm thinking about entering in a contest. I've never sent anything into a publisher before. I'm wondering if it has any merit. Would appreciate ALL feedback...+ and -
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Friendly Fire on a Cold Winter's Morn
George logged onto his account. “Can you believe this January weather?” read the message on his wall. “Coldest winter in twenty years. Global warming my ass!"
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Ex- Ferris creates life part 2
"I enjoy attention" said Ferris "its just that it's always associated with pain and disassociated with love ".
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Ex - Ferris creates life - part 1
"Can I show you something?" Asked Ferris. "It might not make you proud exactly but it may suggest to you a number of ways in which I could be commercially exploited."
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Blue
I had a cat named 'Blue' rhymed with Kalamazoo Grey with stripes a tabby My mother hated cats a family thing One suffocated a child allegedly But he was only six weeks old A kitten
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Chapter 21: Something to Cry About, and Something to Die About
I stood at the beach angrily as Ida left. My depression was taken over by a short burst of anger, and that was at least enough for me to function.
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Chapter 20: Aftermath
“Hey, Ida.” “Austin?”
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Chapter 19: Repeated History
I hummed softly to myself as I entered the house. I had been out for a walk while Cliff was out doing whatever Cliff did. The fresh air made me feel better.
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Fun In The Sun chapter 12
Nick’s eyes widened, mesmerised by the inevitable unravelling as more and more skin was gradually revealed
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Fun In The Sun chapter 11
His eyes were searching hers, looking for answers, but it was dark. Maybe he couldn’t see her expression.
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