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I love startlings, you have
Posted on Mon, 30 Mar 2020
I love startlings, you have captured them perfectly!
"an iridescence of speckles
that flirt in green and purple."
"a multitude may merge
as one rise and swell of smoke,
and hidden in your memory - the shadow of...
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liked this very much! Made me
Posted on Sat, 28 Mar 2020
liked this very much! Made me think of neatly hovering, the short bursts of 2 lines and the pzazz of the rhymes. Have not seen any type of bee yet. Though the midges have been up for weeks. I don't think they would be so polite
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Thankyou very much Rachel!
Posted on Sat, 28 Mar 2020
Thankyou very much Rachel! Am so glad you liked itp[--------------------------]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]555555555555555 - message from Tina, cat
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loved this. the rhythm is
Posted on Fri, 27 Mar 2020
loved this. the rhythm is like a poem, and as a way of summing up a character in a few words I don't think it's possible to beat :"Pure waste of time. I like that." wonderful. And the way to be the best mother ever. Really enjoyed, thankyou
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I like "little tended"!
Posted on Thu, 26 Mar 2020
I like "little tended"! Flowers like these seem like gifts dropped by the sunshine, I love going round seeing what has come up since the last time. "Peep" is a good word for primross, they do seem shy. And I love the rhythm
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Well Done beating the bug!
Posted on Fri, 20 Mar 2020
Well Done beating the bug! Thankyou for writing to say - I'm so glad you got proper sleep, that will make you better mentally and physically. You'll soon be sitting in your garden with the birds singing round you :0)
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this is horrible and great :
Posted on Sun, 22 Mar 2020
this is horrible and great :
"The numb mother numbering
The days from when it started"
Thinking of the banks of pink bouquets in the supermarket this weekend, your poem makes clear the marketing flaw - one colour does not...
Read full commentPosted in Happy Mother's Day
I found this very moving too,
Posted on Sun, 22 Mar 2020
I found this very moving too, and beautiful as your poems always are!
"all we share is dread,
and we will wait, postpone, cancel
before one hand might hold another,
to transmit nothing other
than love"
as...
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I like how you wander in and
Posted on Thu, 20 Feb 2020
I like how you wander in and out of the painting, and memory and conversation. And like the picture, the female seems to hold up the image of the male
No men really shine even if they insist
they are armoured in one hundred...
Read full commentPosted in Looking at Klimt’s Frieze for Beethoven
happy tails, yes :0) Don't
Posted on Thu, 20 Feb 2020
happy tails, yes :0) Don't cry! If there is a Heaven he will be waiting to show you, that's what I hope
Read full commentPosted in To my Best Friend...(Frankie)
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