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StoryI'm Going Through Changes skinner_jennifer188 years 1 month ago

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I like how you allude to a

Posted on Sat, 28 Dec 2019

I like how you allude to a controlling personality, the way in Maths there is only one right answer:

you have never lost your cold symmetry.

From a distance you appear gentler, 

rounder, but closer up I endured 

the...

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Posted in Decagon

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Oh! So many beautiful

Posted on Sun, 22 Dec 2019

Oh! So many beautiful descriptions!

"glitter still" LOVE THIS

"wind that paces and searches" buffetting consonants

"unrolls its mists" soft sounds

and this!

"I can't rejoice and I can't pray and 

I won't...

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Posted in God rest ye merry, gentlemen

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my mind is made up of Tojan

Posted on Sat, 21 Dec 2019

my mind is made up of Tojan horses - wow!

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Posted in Internal Organs

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I like this too, it is weird

Posted on Tue, 17 Dec 2019

I like this too, it is weird how colours can seem strong sometimes even when it is cloudy, as if the light is inside things instead of shining on them? I particularly like how you notice the leaves. You brought me with you into the moment

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Posted in Today

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You have caught that

Posted on Tue, 17 Dec 2019

You have caught that anticipation at the year's end perfectly, the air thick with fog like packing material. Your last two lines hopeful and the lively rhythm gives a positive feeling

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Posted in Chill

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i am sorry I did not know

Posted on Sat, 14 Dec 2019

i am sorry I did not know what to say about your poem, like a deer when it smells blood I guess, such a wrongness in it. Now you have explained I understand why. Because no one wants to be able to understand this subject, but also you long to,...

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Posted in The Worst

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Agree with Jane, your poem

Posted on Tue, 10 Dec 2019

Agree with Jane, your poem starts off tight and jabby then unwinds into calmness at the end.

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Posted in Awoke, then awaking

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It's masterpiece example of

Posted on Sun, 08 Dec 2019

It's masterpiece example of free verse, line ends, space between stanzas. Even though all the information apart from last line and title, are about movement and stress, it ends with such a sense of peace and relief, I think because of the rhythm...

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Posted in Conditions for sleep

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I liked the hurried way this

Posted on Thu, 05 Dec 2019

I liked the hurried way this starts and breathless way it finishes, like a sigh of relief. Pseudo Summer is a good phrase!

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Posted in From winter to …

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i like your images of the

Posted on Wed, 04 Dec 2019

i like your images of the landscape, also how you link accent with water - sea, rain, mists, phlegm (!) How language like water is everywhere, acid or soft, salt or sweet, in the air, on the ground (page?) in us.The last lines  I thought were...

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Posted in A Slip of the Mother Tongue

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