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Oh Jane WOW
Posted on Wed, 03 Jul 2019
Oh Jane WOW
I just read this, can't convey how brilliant sufficiently as don't have time, but WOW
Read full commentPosted in A Man Riding the Tube Train
waters flooding everywhere
Posted on Fri, 21 Jun 2019
waters flooding everywhere but none that's fit to drink
agree about paraphrases however the water water line is something everyone knows like a nursery rhyme, it's gone beyond being a poem, it's part of the bones of our language now. So...
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wow, that really conveys a
Posted on Wed, 12 Jun 2019
wow, that really conveys a fierce sea! "Feral roaring" is fantastic
Read full commentPosted in The Ocean
"I love it"
Posted on Fri, 07 Jun 2019
"I love it"
your poem holds this as its essence, it's so pared down like your feeling was transported out of you without any interference, there's a pure joy in here. Like Jenny, I've known this too, where you feel a huge strength and...
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it made me hurt in sympathy,
Posted on Mon, 03 Jun 2019
it made me hurt in sympathy, reading. The st of stabbing and stitching, the idea of someone writing their name inside you. "Every door slammed quietly/inside" how you shut yourself in so deep trying to escape feeling
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to start with I thought wow
Posted on Wed, 29 May 2019
to start with I thought wow what gorgeous photos, how could you make a poem to match, but you HAVE, as the photos are still but the poem is full of movement, just as we look around, you show the cow parsley, the buttercups. Then the movement of...
Read full commentPosted in Scenic Variations of the Wye
I love this! You are
Posted on Thu, 23 May 2019
I love this! You are brilliant.
The ogg sounds are like water filled footprints, sucking at the rhythm
Then "idle" mixed with the "S" of secluded makes me think of intruders sliding off, like in fairy tales, the place magically...
Read full commentPosted in Bog Brilliance
wow, that's st francis of
Posted on Tue, 21 May 2019
wow, that's st francis of assissi level!!!
do you find hover flies love your lilles? I had some oriental (I think the beast from the east ate them as gone without trace now) and one had 12 hoverflies either on it or very near? Don't know...
Read full commentPosted in I Didn't Kill the Scarlet Beetles
Enjoyed this so much! I had a
Posted on Wed, 22 May 2019
Enjoyed this so much! I had a bond like that with my dog. the sense that your world is alright because your dog is alright, whatever happens outside you can take it. And the stealthy rhymes, never forced.
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Another one of your wonderful
Posted on Fri, 17 May 2019
Another one of your wonderful walking ones :0)
love "woods of birdsong"
and :
notes of a cuckoo echoing
from time to time
from down below
you catch the space between so cleverly
and the feeling of...
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