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1619 of my comments have received 1654 Great Feedback votes

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Hi Jenny. A cinematic,

Posted on Sun, 15 Mar 2015

Hi Jenny. A cinematic, dramatic sequence. Addie's unsaid thoughts about nature seem to sum things up nicely in that this feels like it's about a balance and the fragility of things. That's a beautiful painting. [Should that say "current of air"...

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Ah pesky crevice tools. There

Posted on Tue, 23 May 2023

Ah pesky crevice tools. There's an impish quality to this story. Maybe a follow up would be the results of the subsequent interrogation of the little ones! This all made me smile, Rhiannon. Paul :) 

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I so look forward to picking

Posted on Tue, 26 Aug 2014

I so look forward to picking this story up and reading more, Jenny. It's clear that your heart and soul went into it. I loved the tension of Dawson being rescued and the children being led to a safe haven. I really like the way you set the scene...

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What a spectacular sea voyage

Posted on Sat, 08 Mar 2014

What a spectacular sea voyage. The sequence with the Snags at the launch was quite something. Then the terror of the flying ants, drip worms and the demise of poor Jason. Onwards to dry land! 

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Hi Jenny. Your characters are

Posted on Sun, 22 Sep 2013

Hi Jenny. Your characters are so carefully drawn. Is the villainous Gregor based on anyone in particular? Paul 

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You bring to life the

Posted on Mon, 29 Jul 2013

You bring to life the workings of a coastal community so well. The imagery of stone cottages, fishermen and people going about their business lends an air of authority to the story. Loved the sequence with the flying fish. Looking forward to the...

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"Gushing, rushing, talk, talk

Posted on Fri, 19 May 2023

"Gushing, rushing, talk, talk,

walk away from work, shirk.."

 

Those first two lines give energy to the rest of the poem. Lots of carefully placed wording means a nicely crafted IP response, Rhiannon. Paul 

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You are painting a great

Posted on Wed, 29 May 2013

You are painting a great villain in Gregor. He seems to have no redeeming qualities at all at the moment. Again, written with a patient pace that adds so much depth. Onwards to Chapter 10 at the weekend.. 

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There's jeapody in that last

Posted on Thu, 18 May 2023

There's jeapody in that last paragraph. Rare mirror magic and a pending Showdown that could result in the loss of familiar powers. Looking forward to reading more :) 

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Enjoyed this foray into the

Posted on Fri, 19 May 2023

Enjoyed this foray into the future. Why is it that I can only think of HAL9000 from "2001: A Space Odyssey" when I imagine AI/computers speaking? I guess a lot of the aspects in the story are already with us - drones and the like. Where will it...

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