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1631 of my comments have received 1668 Great Feedback votes

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"....this snare drum hail.."

Posted on Tue, 09 May 2023

"....this snare drum hail.."

A journey of introversion and an inner din that's a constant chatter. I can hear it now.

Creative and imaginative. Very nicely done, Jane. 

 

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"... spotless celestial crew.

Posted on Thu, 11 May 2023

"... spotless celestial crew..."

The first two lines get the poem off to a flyer and it takes off and flies. Great lines, wonderful images. Enjoyed. Paul 

 

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Me three. Beautiful Cornwall.

Posted on Tue, 09 May 2023

Me three. Beautiful Cornwall. You have captured a sea shore laden with magic in this poem.

Some great lines like "....reurned ashore by the erosion of wind.."

Gorgeous poem. 

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"....ships afloat the green

Posted on Mon, 08 May 2023

"....ships afloat the green sea,

harvesting.."

 

Such lovely images conjured, Rhiannon. Just lovely. Paul :) 

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I find myself agreeing with

Posted on Sun, 07 May 2023

I find myself agreeing with Alfred N Muggins on most issues. I do sometimes wonder what subject he has a differing opinion on with David Kirtley. It would make an interesting piece. 

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We can only hope for all of

Posted on Sun, 07 May 2023

We can only hope for all of those things. If Charles and Camilla can make a contribution for the greater good then they will go down n history as decent people. "The Green King". Yes, why not. 

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I liked the sequence of Emily

Posted on Sun, 07 May 2023

I liked the sequence of Emily and the woofer eating hot dogs in the park. You can feel the plot strands gradually coming together. Looking forward to reading more :) 

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Wow that's a passionate poem

Posted on Tue, 02 May 2023

Wow that's a passionate poem from Alfred. A strong message to Putinpot. Ivan the Terrible - yes. Do that. 

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Fluffy UFOs! Another

Posted on Tue, 02 May 2023

Fluffy UFOs! Another beautiful ramble with you, Rhiannon. American skunk cabbages sound sinister. Lovely pics too. Paul :) 

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You write with extraordinary

Posted on Sun, 30 Apr 2023

You write with extraordinary strength, Jean. It felt like I was inside your head, the detail you describe. Cancer seems to be a dogged foe. Well my money's on you to be the winner in this fight. As ever, an amazing account to read even if it is...

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