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1719 of my comments have received 1763 Great Feedback votes

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"...just a dreamer

Posted on Wed, 26 Jul 2023

"...just a dreamer

who survives in shadows.."

 

Beautifully put but I think you are so much more than that, Jenny. A poem that eloquently underlines your love of writing and artfully depicts how many others feel. Paul :) 

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Posted in When All I Need Is Artistry

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Yes, dogs can be like that -

Posted on Tue, 25 Jul 2023

Yes, dogs can be like that - a beast to one person and as soft as butter with someone else. You held the tension all the way through, Jane. The weaving in of the family background and issues was deftly done. A very credible, enjoyable story...

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Yes, 1-1 after extra time and

Posted on Tue, 25 Jul 2023

Yes, 1-1 after extra time and, funnily enough, I can't remember the penalty shoot out score or probably choose to forget. Glad the Muggins clan caught the match even if it did end in disappointment. Onwards to the next tale of Alfred N Muggins...

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Posted in Ride a White Horse to Banbury Cross! By Alfred N.Muggins Part 3

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"This delightful Balkan woman

Posted on Wed, 26 Jul 2023

"This delightful Balkan woman with flashing eyes and stainless steel teeth.."

Reading your stories feels like catching up with an old friend you haven't seen in a while. Yes, a free flowing, chatty style that reels the reader in and...

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Ah so this story will run on.

Posted on Mon, 24 Jul 2023

Ah so this story will run on. This is good. You are building the tension nicely and the weaving in of the family history adds its own tension. Looking forward to more :)

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Another lovely vignette,

Posted on Mon, 24 Jul 2023

Another lovely vignette, Rhiannon. Marmaladey shade, yes. I have two ginger tom cats and adore them. I enjoyed reading about Hobbes and that's a super pic. Paul

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Eesh the tension of making it

Posted on Mon, 24 Jul 2023

Eesh the tension of making it back in time to watch most of the match. Beautiful semi medieval towns. Yes, I guess so. You should try Brackley as well at some point. It's very lovely and rich in history and interesting buildings. 

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Posted in Ride a White Horse to Banbury Cross! By Alfred N.Muggins Part 2

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Made me think of Stephen King

Posted on Sun, 23 Jul 2023

Made me think of Stephen King's "Cujo". I must admit, I didn't see that twist coming which is always the sign of good writing. Adriotly done, Jane. Really enjoyed. Paul

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Nicely done. How to unpick an

Posted on Sat, 22 Jul 2023

Nicely done. How to unpick an ideology with a single question. Civilisations have begun and ended with rampant conjecture. The last few lines said it all :) 

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"Rivulets stream

Posted on Sun, 23 Jul 2023

"Rivulets stream

thinly 

down landscapes 

sheerness.."

 

An evocative, picturesque portrait of the path of rain. Enjoyed, Richard. Paul 

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Posted in Through Our Country Window

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