Lit Crit - On Masculinity - in Kipling's The Brushwood Boy, You know when you're searching through the laptop and find something you don't remember writing? Well this happens to me often -remember now! It was a presentation thingy..
re-sub, here already - and now permission to use this Monk art, by my arty monkey friend and sister -and by the woman for whom it was painted. Thank you both :)
This is a very cool love poem. Memories do have their own distances - love how you use space in this -those private mirages- to bridge disconnection, very clever, very true, very simply brilliant ending,and lightly done - Wouldn't change a word...
those shoal less fish....suspended animation, and those flick book silent movies on repeat - what are those centaurs up to? Questions are arrows of light that sometimes burn out..a sad spin around the galaxy, black swan tour, beautifully written...
Lovely read - swan doctors...I've been worried about the birds
Posted on Wed, 22 Apr 2020
on the river for a while...I'm moored by a Coots nest and the birth of 6 healthy little punk scruffs 3 days ago was lovely to see! Papa and Ma brought them over to visit today :) Your poem reminds me... the space for the remembering, borrowing...
Lovely to read - will have another go... Inter(n)ment or interment? I love rocks and stones in a poem...all the elements here...for the remembering, the ending patient and detached enough to feel wise words indeed! The cacoon of a cave poem - all...
liked this lots -rememberng someone remembering -pictured it, nice lead in - :o) may be i've been there tho... maybe i know Ari...liked the teapots -good poem EwanRead full comment
Super!
Posted on Mon, 04 May 2020
Super!
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This is a very cool love poem
Posted on Sun, 03 May 2020
This is a very cool love poem. Memories do have their own distances - love how you use space in this -those private mirages- to bridge disconnection, very clever, very true, very simply brilliant ending,and lightly done - Wouldn't change a word...
Read full commentPosted in Distance
those shoal less fish...
Posted on Sat, 02 May 2020
those shoal less fish....suspended animation, and those flick book silent movies on repeat - what are those centaurs up to? Questions are arrows of light that sometimes burn out..a sad spin around the galaxy, black swan tour, beautifully written...
Read full commentPosted in A Universe
Lovely read - swan doctors...I've been worried about the birds
Posted on Wed, 22 Apr 2020
on the river for a while...I'm moored by a Coots nest and the birth of 6 healthy little punk scruffs 3 days ago was lovely to see! Papa and Ma brought them over to visit today :) Your poem reminds me... the space for the remembering, borrowing...
Read full commentPosted in I Want To Tell You Things
Lovely to read - will have
Posted on Fri, 17 Apr 2020
Lovely to read - will have another go... Inter(n)ment or interment? I love rocks and stones in a poem...all the elements here...for the remembering, the ending patient and detached enough to feel wise words indeed! The cacoon of a cave poem - all...
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Loved the distilled ending -
Posted on Sun, 19 Apr 2020
Loved the distilled ending - beautifully written :)
Posted in Juniper Tree
liked this lots -rememberng
Posted on Wed, 27 Feb 2008
liked this lots -rememberng someone remembering -pictured it, nice lead in - :o) may be i've been there tho... maybe i know Ari...liked the teapots -good poem EwanRead full commentPosted in Café Aphrodite
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