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The Making of Love
Creep up the stairs...peep in through a crack in their bedroom door.
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A Borderline Case (Poetry Monthly)
Migrants from India, Bangladesh, China...passports forcibly seized at the border...
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My Father's House
Many rooms you and I have slept in...
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A Clockwork Forager
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You did it again, tibi,
Posted on Wed, 01 Apr 2015
You did it again, tibi, created a wonderful picture with your words. Many thanks for them...
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Loved this, tibi, and your
Posted on Sun, 29 Mar 2015
Loved this, tibi, and your sssts. So very onomatopoeic...
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I was thrown the first time I
Posted on Tue, 24 Mar 2015
I was thrown the first time I ever got on a horse. I think the stable-girl gave me the wrong horse for a laugh, but it certainly wasn't funny. Some months later, I tried again at a different stables, and got thrown again. Needless to say, I...
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Light and shade, a great
Posted on Fri, 20 Mar 2015
Light and shade, a great example of this here, PT.
Tina
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So much said in so few words,
Posted on Sun, 22 Mar 2015
So much said in so few words, tibi. An art in itself.
Tina
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You encapsulate the emotion
Posted on Sat, 14 Mar 2015
You encapsulate the emotion so very well here. Beautifully written.
Tina
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Hello there, Vera. Pleased
Posted on Wed, 11 Mar 2015
Hello there, Vera. Pleased you enjoyed reading this.. as much, it seems, as I enjoyed writing it. The particular 'joyfulness of narcissus' had already been planted by the previous owner of my house, and they flower every year, just by my pond...
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Hi there, Bc...a lovely poem.
Posted on Sun, 01 Mar 2015
Hi there, Bc...a lovely poem.
Maybe, third stanza, third line, think about saying either:-
'You watched me', or 'You looked at me'.
An evocative write, and the last three lines, magical...
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I think, if we are all being
Posted on Fri, 20 Feb 2015
I think, if we are all being honest, there is a darker side to most of us, and I found myself identifying with most of it . Much food for thought, in this well written piece.
Tina
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'For now we see, through a
Posted on Mon, 09 Feb 2015
'For now we see, through a glass darkly; but then face to face;; now I know in part; but then shall I know, even as also I am known'. (Corinthians 13:12) KJV.
You've cracked it again, Rob.
Tina
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