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Too Cold for Snow...
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"Yours Truly"
"Well. Of all the cheek! Just can't believe this is meant to be about, 'Yours truly' "... he said.
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The Theory of Everything and Nothing
(Edit) From now on, nothing is the same...forever tainted.
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Painting the Homeless Godly
As long as spots go , hand in hand, with chickenpox, so Billy was always there in the pitch next to mine...
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Painted Lady Motel
It's thirty years since we booked in to the seedy motel; Mr and Mrs Might-Have-Beens...
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Bee...you sure had me...hook,
Posted on Sat, 01 Aug 2015
Bee...you sure had me...hook, line and sinker.
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Rhiannon...this is so close
Posted on Thu, 23 Jul 2015
Rhiannon...this is so close to home, it was almost as if I had written it myself. You may describe it as 'a poem, written fairly raggedly...' I most certainly do not. It all flowed from the heart, and as such, flawless in its truthfulness,...
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Bee, my daughter always kept
Posted on Mon, 20 Jul 2015
Bee, my daughter always kept these few lines scrawled on a piece of paper, pinned above her bed.
Give me a draught of laughter before the day begins
Whatever follows after, it's the happy heart that wins.
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Yes, some wonderful
Posted on Wed, 08 Jul 2015
Yes, some wonderful characterisation here, Ray. Much enjoyed.
Tina
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Have just read this, Rhiannon
Posted on Sun, 12 Jul 2015
Have just read this, Rhiannon, before I turn in for the night...exhausted, as ever and the first line of your uplifting hymn drew me in. Thanks for posting this. I always look forward to reading these little gems on Sundays...like a breath of...
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Fantastically original, Ray.
Posted on Thu, 02 Jul 2015
Fantastically original, Ray. Really enjoyed. Keeeeeeeeeeeeep writing, as they say...
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This is so beautiful..
Posted on Thu, 02 Jul 2015
This is so beautiful...Especially liked, 'faithful ochre waked cloud'. Thought provoking and inspiring.
Tina
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Wonderful internal rhyming
Posted on Sat, 27 Jun 2015
Wonderful internal rhyming here, Rob...change/remained, prism/ripples, for example. In all an enigmatic piece, as its subject.
Very much enjoyed, and by reading it just now you have taken me away from the mundane (polishing,...
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Couldn't agree with insert
Posted on Wed, 24 Jun 2015
Couldn't agree with insert more, af. You do have a real talent.
Tina
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Love Leonard Cohen...for my
Posted on Sat, 20 Jun 2015
Love Leonard Cohen...for my sins
and love this. Brilliant writing, as ever....
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