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'In the Name of the Father'
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The Naming of Bulbs
How impatient they are to be freed – these teardrops with roots,
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As it is in Heaven (Poetry Monthly)
The clocks didn't stop...dogs insisted on barking...
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Future Conditional
Say the sun turns into a red giant tomorrow...Say the clouds' water supply gets turned off - permanently....
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A Passing Thought (Poetry Monthly)
Don't mind if I scream at the next person tells me, 'You're in the best place'...because I'm not.
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Rhiannon...so very beautiful.
Posted on Sun, 06 Dec 2015
Rhiannon...so very beautiful...the words, and your vocal interpretation
As...
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Brilliantly executed,
Posted on Tue, 01 Dec 2015
Brilliantly executed, Rhiannon. A cornucopia of literary delight. As insert rightly says 'words tripping into themselves'.
Tina
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Thank you for inspiring me
Posted on Sun, 29 Nov 2015
Thank you for inspiring me this wet, and windy Monday morning, Rhiannon. The tune you have written this to is one of my favourites, and it was sung at my wedding, and at my late daughter's celebration of life. These words of yours bringing me...
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I SO enjoyed listening to you
Posted on Tue, 24 Nov 2015
I SO enjoyed listening to you reading this, Rhiannon. It made it come alive, jump off the screen at me. Beautifully done, both the performance and the writing of the poem...
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Totally convincing dialect,
Posted on Wed, 11 Nov 2015
Totally convincing dialect, lw. So very, very difficult to achieve, but you have succeeded here,...
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And I too, am deeply touched
Posted on Thu, 22 Oct 2015
And I too, am deeply touched by the pathos written, so deftly, in between these lines, Rhiannon. Aaaaaaaaaaa...tissue, is all that there is left for me to say
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I have a marvellous view of
Posted on Tue, 20 Oct 2015
I have a marvellous view of Venus from my garden, right now, cassie (when it gets dark, of course, that is)
Lovely poem, and especially admired, 'Sleepy skies bereft of contenders'. Certainly nothing shines as brightly in the sky, not...
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Much for the reader to think
Posted on Tue, 13 Oct 2015
Much for the reader to think about in this poem, Rhiannon...it is short, certainly not sweet, and the final stanza, far reaching.
An excellent take on the I.P.
Tina
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Oh, Lindy...I could so
Posted on Mon, 12 Oct 2015
Oh, Lindy...I could so identify with this...but I'm afraid to say, mine was a bolster case held the oranges, etc....
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Scrumptiously atmospheric,
Posted on Mon, 05 Oct 2015
Scrumptiously atmospheric, Lindy, well deserving of its cherries
Tina
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