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I've read all three parts of

Posted on Fri, 02 Mar 2018

I've read all three parts of this and the intricate detail and local colour really shine through. The dialogue is lively and the characters are beginning to emerge as believable people.

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I hope your snow will

Posted on Fri, 02 Mar 2018

I hope your snow will disappear soon Camilla. I am also stuck here and it's driving me bananas, but I'm painting the insides of cupboards, and windows which is quite soothing and stops me from thinking about the fact that the heating oil is...

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Some tight,sharp observation

Posted on Sat, 24 Feb 2018

Some tight,sharp observation in this pen portrait. A very believable study of (unjustifiable) smug

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Firstly I really liked the

Posted on Wed, 14 Feb 2018

Firstly I really liked the way in which you ended this - because I was expecting them all to crash, and you don't really think about the 'almost' do you - so the detailed description of just before the crash was brilliant, as was the way in which...

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You had me right there on the

Posted on Tue, 13 Feb 2018

You had me right there on the porch with you. I like the quiet contemplative style of this poem - well done, and welcome back!

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beautiful observation in this

Posted on Sat, 10 Feb 2018

beautiful observation in this London - I particularly like those first few lines

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I love your animated writing

Posted on Tue, 06 Feb 2018

I love your animated writing style Elsie - brings the whole thing to life - and the school description rings more than a few bells as I went to somewhere similar (until 'asked to leave'). Very much looking forward to part three!

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Posted in Les Rowse, Philippe and I Part 2

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What an interesting mix of

Posted on Fri, 02 Feb 2018

What an interesting mix of things you have this piece Elsie. I'm waiting with bated breath to find out about Philippe!

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This is a little gem of a

Posted on Mon, 22 Jan 2018

This is a little gem of a poem!

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oh dear - perhaps this is the

Posted on Sat, 09 Dec 2017

oh dear - perhaps this is the turning point and it's all going to be kittens and rainbows from now on. I hope it gets better soon xx

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