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2583 of my comments have received 2647 Great Feedback votes

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... mind you, it depends when

Posted on Sat, 23 Feb 2019

... mind you, it depends when this is set (which I've forgotten again!) Might be worth looking it up. I can tell you what it was like in 1987 and 1992. The first time you could see the screen, but the person doing the scan wouldn't talk at all -...

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Posted in Angel 35 (scan)

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'She banged through the

Posted on Sat, 23 Feb 2019

'She banged through the toilet door and had her knicker down at her ankles as if they were on greased castors'  knickers!

Twins!!! Perhaps that'll make her high risk and she'll be let out?

When you do the rewrite, as far as I...

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'Just a friend. If it is was

Posted on Fri, 22 Feb 2019

'Just a friend. If it is was a boyfriend I’d be raging.'

if it was

Poor Angel. I think it's good to take the pace down a bit as you have in this part

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Such a sad story

Posted on Sat, 23 Feb 2019

Such a sad story

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This is our Story of the Week

Posted on Wed, 20 Feb 2019

This is our Story of the Week - Congratulations!

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Posted in La Femme d'argent

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This is absolutely wonderful!

Posted on Wed, 20 Feb 2019

This is absolutely wonderful! I wish you were more than just an occasional poster - do come back soon with another one

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Posted in La Femme d'argent

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Some delicious description in

Posted on Wed, 20 Feb 2019

Some delicious description in this Rhiannon. Are we still missing our Elms, or did they find a disease resistant variety to replant with?

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It's all happening in this

Posted on Sat, 16 Feb 2019

It's all happening in this part! Maybe when you do the next draft - I know you have a lot of information to get out but I'm not completely sure the dilaogue sounds as natural here as it usually does

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'I don’t here anything from

Posted on Tue, 12 Feb 2019

'I don’t here anything from him.'  hear

the scene between Karen and Angel is really touching 

Has she had a tooth knocked out?

Keep going!

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Posted in Angel 24 (Corton Vale)

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‘That’s no what you’re friend

Posted on Mon, 11 Feb 2019

‘That’s no what you’re friend Kimmie says. She says you were partying and she went into the room with one of his friends and she came into the living room after hearing a whaling noise '

your friend Kimmie. a wailing noise. Also I don't...

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