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My stories

Cherry

Saturday's child

One from the archives, re-written
Cherry

Portrait of an artist, sleeping

remembering a fellow art student from my college days back in the 70's
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Girl by the lake, standing

"Before us stands yesterday" - Ted Hughes: The Crow Above quote doesn't have much to do with this poem - I just liked it.
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Toxic

The problems of involuntary benzodiapine addiction & withdrawals have again hit the news (front page of the Times,1.10.12) prompting me to post this, scribbled in a notebook two years ago...
Cherry

Watching the candle burn

August 6th: one date, different years, distinctive for two members of the same family - one lived a very short time, the other much longer - both imperfect

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48 of my comments have received 50 Great Feedback votes

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Yes, powerful emotions coming

Posted on Tue, 02 Aug 2016

Yes, powerful emotions coming through the poem, culminating in the one word WHY? x

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Posted in Joanie's Poem

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Great...look forward to

Posted on Sat, 30 Jul 2016

Great...look forward to reading edited version.  

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Posted in The Cobbe House part i a dark history.

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Good beginning, if a little

Posted on Sat, 30 Jul 2016

Good beginning, if a little long, but the mini-cliffhanger ending leaves the reader curious to know what comes next.  Quite a few typos though, so maybe a bit more editing next time...

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Posted in The Cobbe House part i a dark history.

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You've said it all Ewan, and

Posted on Sat, 16 Jul 2016

You've said it all Ewan, and so well.  Thank you.

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Posted in More Trouble Every Day

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Close to home for me, hence

Posted on Tue, 12 Jul 2016

Close to home for me, hence delay in commenting, but I really liked the way it  was written, so much I read it twice.

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Posted in THE BALLAD OF ANNIE GRAY (Poetry Monthly)

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I'm not sure whether you

Posted on Mon, 11 Jul 2016

I'm not sure whether you meant "liqueur" or "liquor" and apostrophe missing from "don't"...but really I'm nit-picking as I liked this a lot.

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Posted in Addicts

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Bang-on.

Posted on Thu, 30 Jun 2016

Bang-on.

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Posted in Boris

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Moody and magnificent.

Posted on Tue, 14 Jun 2016

Moody and magnificent.

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Posted in Something Dead In The Road

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Simply beautiful.  

Posted on Thu, 12 May 2016

Simply beautiful.  

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Posted in Delicate

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Ordinary lives, lived, re

Posted on Thu, 24 Mar 2016

Ordinary lives, lived, re-lived...

Loved this, Tina - read it twice. x

 

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Posted in Spring in Suburbia

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