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Feeding the ducks
Heavy with him and you...
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Lullaby
forgotten how to write....so just a few practice lines
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Cold turkey in a clinic with no name, 2000 (IP)
Valium withdrawals in a very strange clinic conforming to Rudolf Steiner's principles of Theosophical medicine. This was not at all what I was expecting....
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Home is where the art is
I knew just where I was this time yesterday - the old familiar smells of linseed turps and oils, sounds of easels dragging over dusty floorboards - clips klinking, restraining
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A girl named Ana
Pro-Ana is a name for community websites supporting those with an eating disorder - often referred to by users simply as `Ana'
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Good beginning, if a little
Posted on Sat, 30 Jul 2016
Good beginning, if a little long, but the mini-cliffhanger ending leaves the reader curious to know what comes next. Quite a few typos though, so maybe a bit more editing next time...
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You've said it all Ewan, and
Posted on Sat, 16 Jul 2016
You've said it all Ewan, and so well. Thank you.
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Close to home for me, hence
Posted on Tue, 12 Jul 2016
Close to home for me, hence delay in commenting, but I really liked the way it was written, so much I read it twice.
Read full commentPosted in THE BALLAD OF ANNIE GRAY (Poetry Monthly)
I'm not sure whether you
Posted on Mon, 11 Jul 2016
I'm not sure whether you meant "liqueur" or "liquor" and apostrophe missing from "don't"...but really I'm nit-picking as I liked this a lot.
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Bang-on.
Posted on Thu, 30 Jun 2016
Bang-on.
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Moody and magnificent.
Posted on Tue, 14 Jun 2016
Moody and magnificent.
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Simply beautiful.
Posted on Thu, 12 May 2016
Simply beautiful.
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Ordinary lives, lived, re
Posted on Thu, 24 Mar 2016
Ordinary lives, lived, re-lived...
Loved this, Tina - read it twice. x
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Not only do I like the way
Posted on Thu, 25 Feb 2016
Not only do I like the way you write, but I very much like the hairstyle, Bee. ☺ Really suits you.
All the best, Coral
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Read it twice, just to get
Posted on Mon, 15 Feb 2016
Read it twice, just to get the right 'feel'...and yes, it's all there, quirky, original and very real.
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