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321 of my comments have received 326 Great Feedback votes

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There is a Mary Poppins feel

Posted on Wed, 27 Jan 2016

There is a Mary Poppins feel to this, Tina. An eclectic arrangement that works very effectively with sound and the imagery, so delicate and pretty.

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Posted in Bird (Poetry Monthly)

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Such satisfying half and full

Posted on Wed, 20 Jan 2016

Such satisfying half and full rhyme here. A stunning paradise and then the close so unsettling with its admission of his untruths. Unusual words give it more Tropicana. Apologies for the brand name, could have said the man from Del Monte....

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Some very detailed scene

Posted on Sun, 17 Jan 2016

Some very detailed scene setting.Welcome to ABCTales, hope you write some more of your story.

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Why, you robbing scounderel.

Posted on Fri, 15 Jan 2016

Why, you robbing scounderel.

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Posted in I stole this poem from Vera

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I love the Russian doll style

Posted on Sat, 09 Jan 2016

I love the Russian doll style of this, the inside- outness that takes you to that haunting. It works even better for the compact run-on structure - no stanzas or white space. A very novel way of telling history via landmarks. 

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Richly animated and original

Posted on Sun, 27 Dec 2015

Richly animated and original writing

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Posted in The Serene Fellowship 1 The Green Serene Part Two

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This is lovely. Seemingly

Posted on Sat, 26 Dec 2015

This is lovely. Seemingly light, an expert of his trade and yet the vulnerability rarely seen. Homelessness is the main political issue that I get on my soapbox about and have to be carried off still yelling about it. Social attitudes in the UK...

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Posted in The Guy Pushing Big Issue

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And still the world turns.

Posted on Wed, 23 Dec 2015

And still the world turns. Tilts, to be precise. This is a feast of unexpected imagery and surprising new perspectives on things we know. Deeply sad but has a keen sense of restoration with it.

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Posted in Stars of Wonder

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The visuals scaffold the

Posted on Wed, 23 Dec 2015

The visuals scaffold the transitory nature of time with delicacy. A very pretty piece with a Romanticist feel to it.

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Posted in Reprise (Poetry Monthly)

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I really liked the strange

Posted on Mon, 21 Dec 2015

I really liked the strange clean lines of this nostalgia.

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Posted in Iggy Pop's Eyes, Manchester Apollo 1977

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