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321 of my comments have received 326 Great Feedback votes

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Welcome to ABCTales, Ken. I

Posted on Wed, 02 Dec 2015

Welcome to ABCTales, Ken. An interesting ntroduction, perhaps the formatting could be adjusted to set your text in bigger paragraph blocks so you can fit more per page.

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Posted in Lamar Theater - Chapter 1

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Some innovative word play and

Posted on Tue, 01 Dec 2015

Some innovative word play and original imagery.

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Posted in Muse

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This is sweetly nostalgic. It

Posted on Mon, 30 Nov 2015

This is sweetly nostalgic. It reminds me of wolves in the mountains even though it's people based.

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Posted in The Blessed Skin

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What a gorgeous concept. 

Posted on Fri, 27 Nov 2015

What a gorgeous concept. 

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Posted in The Snowflake Collector – 7: Every Day Brought New Gifts Now

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This was such fun! 

Posted on Tue, 24 Nov 2015

This was such fun! 

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Posted in A skeuomorphic diet for … (Poetry Monthly)

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It's a very well realised

Posted on Wed, 25 Nov 2015

It's a very well realised story with very sharp observations which contribute significantly to the tension. It was  reassuring at the close - a satisfactory ending that gives your reader something to take away in a restorative  fuzzy way.

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Posted in The Station

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Agreed, Tina. Barbaric.

Posted on Mon, 23 Nov 2015

Agreed, Tina. Barbaric. Numbering the badger has a powerful reverse psychology here. Second person shift is unusual and destabilising - it works really well to distance yourself from the emotion and place your reader central to it. Plus it has...

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Posted in Through the Grass, Darkly...

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The repetition and rhyme in

Posted on Thu, 19 Nov 2015

The repetition and rhyme in this love song makes something restorative of deep loss.It sounds soothing, it's very well composed, satisfying to hear aloud.

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Posted in Rupture (Poetry Monthly)

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The key image of chick and

Posted on Wed, 18 Nov 2015

The key image of chick and the emotions of letting go with flight are so delicately spun together in a gorgeous snapshot. It's evocative, the rich scents and .the outdoors steep it in a specific time and place . I love this.

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Posted in Supplication

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I liked the pulls and drags

Posted on Fri, 13 Nov 2015

I liked the pulls and drags of this, how the setting soothes.

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