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StoryThe Ingestible Kaleidoscope RML111 months 2 weeks ago
StoryA Perfect Cadence Richard Dobbs141 year 4 months ago
StoryHow to make snow Stephen Thom222 years 2 weeks ago
StoryBringing Charlie Back (Rewrite) RML82 years 2 weeks ago
StoryGone rosaliekempthorne62 years 3 weeks ago
StoryTruth or Dare RML62 years 11 months ago
StoryBring Charlie Back RML72 years 11 months ago
StoryThe Red Hair Coyote_Mao63 years 6 months ago
StoryWhat We Had iiWii43 years 8 months ago
StoryLast Call celticman63 years 8 months ago
StoryNothing Gold Can Stay RML03 years 8 months ago
StoryA.E Book I Arc I Asmodience83 years 8 months ago
StoryHere the Happy New Year Comes (End Of Year Carol) well-wisher13 years 8 months ago
StoryBobby and Jenny jolono133 years 8 months ago
StoryA Songstress' Lore of Lies Miguel De La Cruz23 years 9 months ago
StoryTo Every Picture a Story Silver Spun Sand93 years 11 months ago
StoryListen EB153 years 11 months ago
StoryAlmost a Superhero Raymond Fortin54 years 3 weeks ago
StoryMy Own Little World RML84 years 4 weeks ago
StoryChapter 2: Shady Sadie pt. 3 60units34 years 1 month ago
StoryNeed and notes in glass bowls Stephen Thom34 years 1 month ago
StoryAbstract scribble Parson Thru64 years 1 month ago
StoryThe Songstress' Lore of Lies Miguel De La Cruz94 years 1 month ago
StoryUgly. Red. Noo74 years 2 months ago
StoryGrey Noo104 years 2 months ago

My stories

The Ingestible Kaleidoscope

The buzz melts in Sinks under skin It's not quite relief but softens clenched teeth Provides some comfort Numbs the heart hurt A simple illusion for...
Cherry

Bringing Charlie Back (Rewrite)

She’s come over like I asked, and now all I can do is stare at her. My gaze seems to physically agitate her. I need to say something. “Well are you...

Nothing Gold Can Stay

“It’s in these hours I usually learn the most about myself.” “When you’re stoned at 2 AM?” She laughs playfully. “No,” I pluck the joint from her...
Cherry

My Own Little World

I don’t know. I guess it’s just comforting being with you. Smoking with you. Drinking with you. Just me and you, no one else. It’s so much simpler,...

Bring Charlie Back

He keeps looking at me. He needs to stop looking at me. “Just don’t.” I finally say. “Don’t what?” “Give that half-assed apology where you basically...

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7 of my comments have received 7 Great Feedback votes

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Good ideas for a book, but I

Posted on Wed, 30 Dec 2015

Good ideas for a book, but I think all of this should be explained throughout the story. If that's too difficult maybe create a character replacing the spot of the reader? It would just make it easier to write as you move forward rather than have...

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Posted in A.E Book I Arc I

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Really enjoyed this. Some of

Posted on Mon, 08 Jun 2015

Really enjoyed this. Some of your lines really stood out for me. For example, "My couch sunk a little deeper on Sundays for a while". Also loved "I woke up with too much blanket on me for a while." Great job!

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Posted in What We Had

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I think you have a good thing

Posted on Sun, 02 Aug 2015

I think you have a good thing going here. Your stories are easily relatable for teens. The only thing is our language has changed a bit and a lot of the words you use just feel out of place. I'm just going to copy and paste in the story, then...

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Posted in A Songstress' Lore of Lies

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I agree with Bee; really

Posted on Tue, 18 Aug 2015

I agree with Bee; really interesting story. I enjoyed every bit of it, though I feel like a lot of it may have gone over my head. I thought the curtainless windows was a cool detail. Maybe the bright light was exposing the truth? Anyways, great...

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Posted in Need and notes in glass bowls

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Definitely kept my attention.

Posted on Wed, 14 Jan 2015

Definitely kept my attention. Just a little predictable with James being her savior in the end. Like of course he somehow knew Lori was in trouble and found a way to get through the locked doors. Though this can obviously be explained later to...

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Posted in The Songstress' Lore of Lies

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I liked this one too. I

Posted on Mon, 11 May 2015

I liked this one too. I always have a clear picture of what's happening with your writing, which I love. The only thing I've noticed is that sometimees you use a comma when you should really use a semicolon. For exmaple, "Ever since I moved to...

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Posted in A Morning in the Life of Many Ordinary People

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I really enjoyed this. Though

Posted on Mon, 26 Jan 2015

I really enjoyed this. Though I was confused on some parts. For exmaple, when the animal said "thaks for fighting back" I didnt really get this. Also, was the boy so distraught because he used the gun and no the dagger, or just because he killed...

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Posted in After Days - Chapter 1