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| Story | A Melody So Plain | penguin | 0 | 1 year 4 months ago |
| Story | Pad Life 9: Fluffy Bunnies | airyfairy | 23 | 3 years 6 months ago |
| Story | I Give You My Heart | winking_tiger | 1 | 5 years 1 month ago |
| Story | A Local History Facebook Group | penguin | 0 | 5 years 1 month ago |
| Story | pool, october | Di_Hard | 8 | 5 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Next Door | penguin | 0 | 5 years 2 months ago |
| Story | I Am Tired of Complexity | Ewan | 3 | 5 years 2 months ago |
| Story | poetry can be fatal | Coolhermit | 4 | 5 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Jeremiad | penguin | 0 | 5 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Alf Ramsey – My Part In His Triumph | penguin | 7 | 5 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Game of Thrones | penguin | 2 | 5 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Symbiosis | rosaliekempthorne | 2 | 5 years 3 months ago |
| Story | To Be or Not To Be A Poet | luigi_pagano | 8 | 5 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Child (Work in Progress) | midgeryall | 2 | 5 years 3 months ago |
| Story | I Can’t | winking_tiger | 1 | 5 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Adopting At Our Age | penguin | 11 | 5 years 8 months ago |
| Story | Money For The Circus 8 | Ewan | 6 | 5 years 8 months ago |
| Story | I Look Up | onemorething | 9 | 5 years 9 months ago |
| Story | Day Unresolved | penguin | 1 | 5 years 9 months ago |
| Story | A Clockwise Direction | penguin | 4 | 5 years 9 months ago |



I think you've improved it.
Posted on Mon, 19 Oct 2020
I think you've improved it. Bit too fond of hyphenated phrases, but I liked coiled cold and sequin sounds very much.
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Well, I wouldn't delete as
Posted on Mon, 12 Oct 2020
Well, I wouldn't delete as there's a lot to like. But the switch from Butler-Lytton to McGonagall needs a bit more finesse. Wasn't his most famous poem about a fallen bridge? Perhaps a bridge is the answer.
Read full commentPosted in To Be or Not To Be A Poet
I Look Up
Posted on Fri, 10 Apr 2020
Enjoyed, the last 3 lines are lovely. Can't get my head around these lines, though -
By midnight, respite in invisibility
bar the matt absence of stars
Read full commentPosted in I Look Up