Bethan Hall

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StoryEverything was Blue and Green Philip Sidney181 year 3 months ago
StoryGod Knows J.P. Oertel64 years 6 months ago
StoryHello, Bookworm. Bethan Hall04 years 10 months ago
StoryA Passenger Incident johnshade14 years 10 months ago
StoryPeep Show Philip Sidney245 years 1 month ago
StoryTwo Minutes to Midnight - Test Chapter (church) Bethan Hall35 years 2 months ago
StoryFading Colors, Prologue and Ch.1 J.P. Oertel15 years 2 months ago
StoryWhat's a group of hipsters called? london_calling79125 years 3 months ago
StoryTwo Minutes to Midnight - Test Chapter Bethan Hall85 years 3 months ago
StoryA Kind of Self-Inflicted Pain: Optimism va-nessa15 years 3 months ago
StoryBook of Lain (completed prologue) unedited Smitty45 years 3 months ago
StoryFind and Replace Noo35 years 3 months ago
StoryBook of Lain (beginning of novel) Smitty65 years 3 months ago
StoryChosen Ones larry35 years 3 months ago
StoryTwo Minutes to Midnight - Opening Chapter Bethan Hall65 years 3 months ago

My stories

Hello, Bookworm.

(Hey there! This is a writing experiment of mine in getting the reader attached to the narrator so if you are beautiful enough of a person to leave...

Two Minutes to Midnight - Test Chapter (church)

( Just for quick context : Hey there! this is a quick section of a novel I'm trying to peice together and want to know what works and what doesn't so...

Two Minutes to Midnight - Test Chapter

(Just for quick context: Hello! This is just a quick chapter I wanted to take place in the middle of the novel I'm writing between two of the main...
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Two Minutes to Midnight - Opening Chapter

A friend of mine once told me a schoolyard legend that would grow with each passing season. The legend of a man of the forest; as quick as the wind...

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Posted on Tue, 21 Jul 2015

Hey smiley glad I got to read the rest of it so soon. The two major points I would...

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Posted on Sat, 27 Jun 2015

The irony you use in the title is a great idea but what I'd do is shorten it to just "Self-inflicted optimism" ...

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I love minimalist juxtaposing

Posted on Fri, 06 Feb 2015

I love minimalist juxtaposing imagery like the opening of this, it's really impactful ...

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