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66 of my 1,057 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 68 votes

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Barbed Wire Disease

A one mile queue in the car lane all the way down the hill bus lane so empty you could roll an apple down it. But we’re just soppy lemmings Ready for...
Cherry

See it, Say it, Sort it

Dirt riddled cages bustle the almost blind through dirt encrusted tunnels to stations where the dirt still can’t be seen. Changing lines walking...
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I often concern myself

I often concern myself with Why she loves me But it’s a pointless exercise When a good woman’s love is as unwavering as a sparrow’s wing to its young...
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Where there’s no truth there’s no crime

There’s a sad, ominous prescience hanging in the air. With the sickness seed sown and settled in, the world’s flowery persona has wilted into a...
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Some things can never be replaced

I lost the tooth last night Been dreading it ever since The dentist put it in. A grand A whole grand for a bridge Not even an implant. Said he had a...

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66 of my comments have received 68 Great Feedback votes

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Great stream of thought. How

Posted on Sat, 05 Dec 2015

Great stream of thought. How about doing two endings, one as is and then one (following in three lines) as t' t'other part of the psyche? What I'm finding very late on as usual is that men and women are more or less the same in mind minus a few...

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Posted in You're all I ever wanted

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I'm thinking Jonathan Rendall

Posted on Mon, 15 Jun 2015

I'm thinking Jonathan Rendall already and I haven't read past the first para. Lovely

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Posted in My gals call me Sweet Dick

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Made me giggle. Good to see

Posted on Mon, 04 May 2015

Made me giggle. Good to see you back

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Posted in A Song of Fish and Chips

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Sadness is just an untimely

Posted on Fri, 17 Apr 2015

Sadness is just an untimely side-effect without which happiness would not exist, so here's to sadness. Lovely grub.

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Posted in And Spring

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Super stuff. 

Posted on Sat, 04 Apr 2015

Super stuff. 

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Glee into a window seat

Giffnock the place where mill

Simply but expensively

Print jeans. Should

Woman (women?)

Like a traffic warden, guided

Where's the toilet, hen?...

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Posted in flockers 9

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This shows amazing character

Posted on Thu, 26 Mar 2015

This shows amazing character and strength of will. It's strange how a negative aspect of life can be such an empowering shaper and builder to a better future. One thing I've learnt recently is that permission comes from within and the best...

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Posted in Mama

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Wow, this is excellent

Posted on Thu, 26 Mar 2015

Wow, this is excellent writing that exposes the trauma of poverty with murky depth and bright clarity. Looking forward to more

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Posted in March/26/2015

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Love it, PT. Just about says

Posted on Tue, 24 Mar 2015

Love it, PT. Just about says it all in a nutshell. I remember visiting my dad in Cape Town and going to the local Pick n Pay supermarket (from where he was once banned for turning up at the precise time that the pastries were marked down in price...

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Posted in Cedar wood

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Is that of Roehampton, Tina?

Posted on Sun, 01 Mar 2015

Is that of Roehampton, Tina? It reminded me of there alot and the ending says alot too. There's only one way to block it all out.

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Posted in The Beat Goes On

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Nice touch at the end. The

Posted on Wed, 18 Feb 2015

Nice touch at the end. The mind's a powerful thing and sometimes when I'm dreaming and I wake up, I don't know which is reality and which is dream. 

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Posted in Where the nettles grew

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