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I did have a little look, and
Posted on Sat, 14 Apr 2018
I did have a little look, and saw a suggestion that pale colours can use the weaker sun better, and are thereore more prevalant in the spring. Will return if gather any more thought on it!! Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Spring Yellows
I've been away. Just seen
Posted on Thu, 12 Apr 2018
I've been away. Just seen this. It seems to speak of an attempt to return to where one once knew a welcome, but for some reason there is no acceptance, no resonance. I also thought the line 'the only growing is old.' very telling, and...
Read full commentPosted in wind
! I love to see the crinkled
Posted on Sat, 24 Mar 2018
! I love to see the crinkled up little leaves poking or 'squirting' out! So delicate often of colour and texture too. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Growth Spurt
A lovely idea for Poetry
Posted on Sun, 18 Mar 2018
A lovely idea for Poetry Monthly. If we could donate our heart with its feelings and songs, how would we cultivate it?! Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Heart Songs ( Poetry Monthly
A lovely picture of a family
Posted on Thu, 15 Mar 2018
A lovely picture of a family happy in the grace, values, and life given by Jesus. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Everyone Can Have Life
A dreamy time of day, and you
Posted on Fri, 09 Mar 2018
A dreamy time of day, and you've caught the sights rarely noticed and descibed them in such interesting ways. I felt the quiet of an evening stroll! Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Walking home from shopping 8/3/18
I see you've done some work
Posted on Sat, 03 Mar 2018
I see you've done some work on this, smoothing, clarifying and introducing yet more ideas I think. Lots of interesting metaphors and observations. Personally, I feel you could in time probably make the reading even smoother, but that would...
Read full commentPosted in predator (just re uploaded)
I think much of the time with
Posted on Fri, 02 Mar 2018
I think much of the time with dementia, or other types of memory loss, the self-awareness of that loss is quite limited, especially after the first stages. Sometimes it seems that much is lost that have been very superficial concerns, worries and...
Read full commentPosted in Lethe
Lovely picture. Reminder to
Posted on Fri, 23 Feb 2018
Lovely picture. Reminder to listen to the 'snowball of sounds'! The birds seem to know the season's making gentle progress don't they? I like the idea of their stitching. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in emperor's new clothes
You still seem to be inside
Posted on Wed, 21 Feb 2018
You still seem to be inside his skin, bringing to life so many difficulties of adolescence and the struggles of a rather isolated lad with fixations and not a lot of homely understanding and support. And the difficulties of all in the secondary...
Read full commentPosted in Jack Mutant - Which Way is Down? (part twelve)
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