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I have 1826 stories published in 16 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2497729 times and 529 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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Cherry

A new achievement @16 months

9 cubes in a square box, tip them out, chuck one back in anyhow, then 2nd, 3rd, 4th, 5th – 7th, 8th – maybe need a bit of a shove and push in one of the odd-shaped spaces now left, until they slide in. Now one left – …
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Cherry

Near Mortimer’s Cross, Herefordshire 12/12/20

Big sky, evening light, full Lugg churning on, meandering …

A manger-crib [4. of series based on old carols]

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] [4. based on 'Away in a manger'] No crib, just a manger to lay down his head, his mother must place him where cattle had fed. Though he is …

The Evolutionary-creation Myths

There once was a myth that mutations … There once was a myth of long ages … There once was a myth that ‘pooh-poohed’ … There once was a myth of a gradual emergence, from nothing, of animal and plant life evolving …

Blest merriment: Global news 3. of series based on old carols

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] [3. based on the carol 'God rest you merry gentlemen]… Bringing news of real comfort and joy, comfort and joy …

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1309 of my comments have received 1346 Great Feedback votes

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I did have a little look, and

Posted on Sat, 14 Apr 2018

I did have a little look, and saw a suggestion that pale colours can use the weaker sun better, and are thereore more prevalant in the spring. Will return if gather any more thought on it!! Rhiannon

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Posted in Spring Yellows

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I've been away. Just seen

Posted on Thu, 12 Apr 2018

I've been away. Just seen this. It seems to speak of an attempt to return to where one once knew a welcome, but for some reason there is no acceptance, no resonance. I also thought the line 'the only growing is old.' very telling, and...

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Posted in wind

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! I love to see the crinkled

Posted on Sat, 24 Mar 2018

! I love to see the crinkled up little leaves poking or 'squirting' out! So delicate often of colour and texture too. Rhiannon

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Posted in Growth Spurt

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A lovely idea for Poetry

Posted on Sun, 18 Mar 2018

A lovely idea for Poetry Monthly. If we could donate our heart with its feelings and songs, how would we cultivate it?! Rhiannon

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Posted in Heart Songs ( Poetry Monthly

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 A lovely picture of a family

Posted on Thu, 15 Mar 2018

 A lovely picture of a family happy in the grace, values, and life given by Jesus. Rhiannon

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Posted in Everyone Can Have Life

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A dreamy time of day, and you

Posted on Fri, 09 Mar 2018

A dreamy time of day, and you've caught the sights rarely noticed and descibed them in such interesting ways. I felt the quiet of an evening stroll! Rhiannon

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Posted in Walking home from shopping 8/3/18

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I see you've done some work

Posted on Sat, 03 Mar 2018

I see you've done some work on this, smoothing, clarifying and introducing yet more ideas I think. Lots of interesting metaphors and observations. Personally, I feel you could in time probably make the reading even smoother, but that would...

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Posted in predator (just re uploaded)

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I think much of the time with

Posted on Fri, 02 Mar 2018

I think much of the time with dementia, or other types of memory loss, the self-awareness of that loss is quite limited, especially after the first stages. Sometimes it seems that much is lost that have been very superficial concerns, worries and...

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Posted in Lethe

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Lovely picture. Reminder to

Posted on Fri, 23 Feb 2018

Lovely picture. Reminder to listen to the 'snowball of sounds'! The birds seem to know the season's making gentle progress don't they? I like the idea of their stitching. Rhiannon

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Posted in emperor's new clothes

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You still seem to be inside

Posted on Wed, 21 Feb 2018

You still seem to be inside his skin, bringing to life so many difficulties of adolescence and the struggles of a rather isolated lad with fixations and not a lot of homely understanding and support. And the difficulties of all in the secondary...

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Posted in Jack Mutant - Which Way is Down? (part twelve)

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