Rhiannonw
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spring … summer … autumn … winter
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‘The true light which enlightens everyone, was coming into the world’ John 1:9
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] … He came into the world as man to teach, display and save –
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… the number of players in football or cricket teams.…
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Two figures represent 10. the crab that walks sideways …
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A lovely first verse! Your
Posted on Mon, 13 May 2019
A lovely first verse! Your second verse is deliberately contrastingly bleak, I presume to contrast consumerism-living with the wealth of the peace and beauty of creation we have to enjoy. I don't think that it is that the wealthy that would have...
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How veru interesting that the
Posted on Tue, 07 May 2019
How very interesting that the puzzle of those precise measurements in the vision led you to contemplate the precision of the creation. I studied biochemistry (a long time ago!) and was amazed at the detail of how things work together precisely...
Read full commentPosted in Precision.
As Penny4athought says, you
Posted on Sun, 05 May 2019
As Penny4athought says, you describe so effectively the shock of the tumble, and the pain, and the instinctive response of the believer of thankfulness for life spared, and then the awareness of need of help in the pain. He doesn't take away all...
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The one you found a rock gone
Posted on Tue, 30 Apr 2019
The one you found a rock gone, but the 'sand' left in its wake still gives steadiness? A rock having barnacles from life's bruises, but also thrift joy bubbling out is an evocative picture. Rhiannon
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Another brief and neat
Posted on Sun, 28 Apr 2019
Another brief and neat thoughtful little one. Interesting that with all the desperate situations, some of the slaves must have been happier than some of the masters, because of knowing God's comfort, and some slave-master relationships developed...
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A perceptive little one.
Posted on Sun, 28 Apr 2019
A perceptive little one. Interesting comment on the effect of drudgery encouraging temptation. And the play on mourning/morning. Actually in that 4th line from the end , I suspect you don't want the 'is' in the line? Rhiannon
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Very moving, Graham. The fact
Posted on Sat, 27 Apr 2019
Very moving, Graham. The fact that she could talk out to you at least shows she valued you, even though probably aware that the closeness was lost at present, and also probably had satisfaction that your life was working out reasonably. And would...
Read full commentPosted in One Chance And I Blew It
Thank you, Jane. There have
Posted on Thu, 18 Apr 2019
Thank you, Jane. There have been moving stories from those caught up in disasters also, and the cameraderie and also the dawning of faith and prayer for whether they be rescued or die. The Chilean mining accident and rescue after 2 months was...
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I like the encouragement of
Posted on Tue, 16 Apr 2019
I like the encouragement of viewing a static house and being inspired to think, as of a film running, of the happenings and occupants over so many years.Inside the envelope, as you say!
Her smile a scent forgot is a lovely line...
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We appreciate the senses
Posted on Sat, 13 Apr 2019
We appreciate the senses remaining when some are fading, the ability to still hear sweet sounds and see beauty, even if a little less clearly. Rhiannon
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