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Near Mortimer’s Cross, Herefordshire 12/12/20

Big sky, evening light, full Lugg churning on, meandering …

A manger-crib [4. of series based on old carols]

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] [4. based on 'Away in a manger'] No crib, just a manger to lay down his head, his mother must place him where cattle had fed. Though he is …

The Evolutionary-creation Myths

There once was a myth that mutations … There once was a myth of long ages … There once was a myth that ‘pooh-poohed’ … There once was a myth of a gradual emergence, from nothing, of animal and plant life evolving …

Blest merriment: Global news 3. of series based on old carols

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] [3. based on the carol 'God rest you merry gentlemen]… Bringing news of real comfort and joy, comfort and joy …

Observing

Look through any window of the train … passing … glimpse of lives, then all their faces gone.

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1318 of my comments have received 1356 Great Feedback votes

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I guess the enjoyment of snow

Posted on Mon, 19 Feb 2018

I guess the enjoyment of snow gets more child-like again as we get older, as the need to travel for work doesn't bring the frustrations usually. Rhiannon

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Posted in The Snow

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Some thoughtful leading to

Posted on Sat, 17 Feb 2018

Some thoughtful leading to thinking about the blessing of the commandments, so important as a foundation in life, and to realising our need of his forgiveness for our failings, through Jesus's death and resurrection. Rhiannon

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Posted in Vacation Bible School (Book 2)

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I so liked your pun on the

Posted on Wed, 14 Feb 2018

I so liked your pun on the Inspiration Point!!  And I had to look up 'Freshet', which I must try to remember! Especially liked the last line, and the wealth of alliteration.

I was a bit puzzled by 'murmer curdles'  ('murmur'?) and...

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Posted in Chutes of Spring

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A communication, an honest

Posted on Wed, 14 Feb 2018

A communication, an honest sharing that you can trust is so precious. Also the personal nature of the message/words conveyed by the folding shut, and finding daylight in yours. Rhiannon

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Posted in Now

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Real friendship need a real

Posted on Tue, 13 Feb 2018

Real friendship need a real sharing, and caring, not a 'face-book' like façade or platitudes. It is rare, but precious, and knows when to visit, when to leave, when to speak, understands, often through going through difficulties together....

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Posted in Hologram

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This seems in such stark

Posted on Sun, 04 Feb 2018

This seems in such stark contrast to what you describe as your beautiful Solway plain. Both the person and the countryside can be damaged, can come back to freshness. Rhiannon

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Posted in Dope

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I think it probably does fit

Posted on Fri, 26 Jan 2018

I think it probably does fit to give the sense of a gradual fading of her life. Rhiannon

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Posted in A Long Term Care Facility

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So many places where there is

Posted on Fri, 26 Jan 2018

So many places where there is such loving care. And little signs of peace and of a consciousness little understood. A person I know would probably not remember what lunch actually was, but maybe be remembering meals long past! Rhiannon

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Posted in A Long Term Care Facility

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Captures the poignancy of war

Posted on Thu, 25 Jan 2018

Captures the poignancy of war, ending, but such a sadness of having been. Rhiannon

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Posted in At the End

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What a wonderful experience

Posted on Sun, 21 Jan 2018

What a wonderful experience to warm your discomfort and temporary immobility! No two sunrises are the same!  gives a great sense of the privilege of 'seeing this one'. Sunsets and rainbows and all beauty of our world to be delighted in. Rhiannon

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Posted in Undying Beauty

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