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The Real Jesus
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Who was Jesus, do you know? … Now they could bear persecution, no more weakened by confusion, for the truth of resurrection meant sure hope, and …
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Near Titley
Path mown through the bracken, up the slope, over the humpy field – sky so large – …
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Muck-Rakers
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] A scoundrel lacking principles delights to dig out vice exposing, pushing into view, turn minds to what’s...
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Too much to say to bother with consonants!
‘What is the picture on your birthday card?’ "box!”* ‘What does it say inside? What is that letter?’ “Uh for Deidi!*” ‘Where have you been this...
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Competition
Goosegrass shoots up clinging, climbing choking, smothering the hedge …
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Yes, not shallow love, but
Posted on Tue, 22 Oct 2019
Yes, not shallow love, but your response to those requests was testing for you both as to whether you were ready for long-term committment, for if so there would be respect for challenges and patience, and not putting you under wrong pressure. It...
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Again, you are able to relate
Posted on Sun, 20 Oct 2019
Again, you are able to relate your feelings at the time well, but also that awareness now of your naivety and vulnerableness, and awareness from the distance of the happiness but shallowness of your understanding of each other at the time....
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It sounds like cycling makes
Posted on Sat, 19 Oct 2019
It sounds like cycling makes you notice things, as well as getting fresh air and relaxation, but the slightly greater speed seems to give quite a different experience from walking, as 'things' are passed more quickly and so more of them in the...
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You do keep the reader with
Posted on Sat, 19 Oct 2019
You do keep the reader with you in your writing, Jean, and engagingly frank in your clear memories of young friendships and exploring understanding the boys you meet! Rhiannon
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You always have a way with
Posted on Wed, 16 Oct 2019
You always have a way with words, Jane. But I would long to bring some Spring into these lives not just 'enjoy' their described tense and fragile cold. It seems like where existentialism leads, but we weren't made for that and need that 'God-...
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Walking with you through the
Posted on Mon, 14 Oct 2019
Walking with you through the skeleton is effectively done.
But because we do not need the death of a whale to survive, we can forget that others have probably in the past, especially at a time when they were in abundance in our oceans....
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You bring the walk to life
Posted on Sun, 13 Oct 2019
You bring the walk to life for all the senses! And encourage to notice all the little things around, with interest and pleasure. On Saturday we were on the hills (also without rain!) and encountered a little group of cubs and their leaders, the...
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Thankyou, Di, very much.
Posted on Wed, 09 Oct 2019
Thankyou, Di, very much.
No, I don't remember all of the origins and occasions of my writing. But there are some things that stick a bit, and occasions I have long remembered certain words or phrases coming to complete a line better etc,...
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Don't worry about anything,
Posted on Mon, 07 Oct 2019
Don't worry about anything, just wondered about the 'peel' in the last line, but I think I see itis probably that enclosing the words/thoughts that they need to escape from, or basically the same as the vowels colouring - which I hadn't thought...
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A clever interweaving,
Posted on Mon, 07 Oct 2019
A clever interweaving, flowing of these linked beautiful shades. I wasn't sure I understood the last line correctly. As there's no full-stop, I wondered if it is finished? [Appeal - a peel: pun?] Rhiannon
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