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I have 2118 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
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Any Hard Task

It was still an up-hill pull with determined will to fully fulfil the task undertaken and reach the top not stop or flop or trip or slip or sleep,...

Scorning the warning

‘Put Micaiah in the prison.’ (For his warning Ahab spurned.) ‘Give him only bread and water, until safely I’ve returned.’ …
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The Age of Discovery

From new-born breath ’til still of death: Hearing sounds and conversation, gazing round in exploration … mouth contortions … life-long, look and think …
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His full glory seen soon

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] In a manger, glory veiled; glimpses of his power revealed as he taught and healed, began life and death’s...

The Old and the Young

Her Daddy playing music upon his violin for older folk in Home of Care … and gently tap their feet and smile remembering past days … she scampered, pirouetted round to her Daddy’s latest tune. …‘Can we ask the dancing girl again to visit us?!
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1546 of my comments have received 1594 Great Feedback votes

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I imagined you lying looking

Posted on Sun, 28 Jul 2019

I imagined you lying looking in drowsy sunshine down through the grasses and leaves to the trickling stream in the first verse. And the contrast of the black beetles gave a good reading effect!

I suppose afterwards you are comparing the...

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Posted in grass/july

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There has been a lot of

Posted on Fri, 26 Jul 2019

There has been a lot of interest in encouraging the use of the language more and has given interest to schools using both languages. I grew up on the east side of Wales (Barry in the south, and Wrexham  in the north), but then had some time out...

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Posted in Welcome In Welsh

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Quite a thought-provoking

Posted on Sat, 27 Jul 2019

Quite a thought-provoking rant – the ease of popular belligerence over fair assessment of all sides of issues, and of the characters of all involved and their mixtures of good and poor motives. Rhiannon

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Posted in Never Satisfied

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I liked the feeling/picture

Posted on Fri, 28 Jun 2019

I liked the feeling/picture of morning-family rush. I wasn't sure of the meaning of the last verse! Sorry. Rhiannon

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Posted in The Best

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Is it meant to be 'bathroom'

Posted on Fri, 28 Jun 2019

Is it meant to be 'bathroom' in line 4, Richard? Rhiannon

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Posted in The Best

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Interesting description of

Posted on Sun, 23 Jun 2019

Interesting description of 'make-up'! and of the beauty from within which isn't deceptive or fleeting (Proverbs 31:30), and is a by-product of honouring God, and trustworthiness and a caring nature. Rhiannon

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Posted in Blossom So Divine

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You make a striking

Posted on Mon, 17 Jun 2019

You make a striking visualisation of a 'protective', inevitable hardness, not to be hurt, and likewise bound to hurt each other.

Came to mind Proverbs 27:17: 'As iron sharpens iron, so one man sharpens another.' which has always impressed...

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Posted in We are Rocks

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A lot of useful metaphor

Posted on Fri, 14 Jun 2019

A lot of useful metaphor going on here, Graham. Ties in with the parable again (though he did repent, just in time).

Fields of Gold are sewn With dreams corrupt The precious yellow fever Is hard to swallow Broken teeth, broken dreams...

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Posted in Greed For Gold

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Is this autobiographical? A

Posted on Tue, 11 Jun 2019

Is this autobiographical? A broken back? A wolf? Rhiannon

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Posted in The Rain

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I don't know which I prefer,

Posted on Thu, 06 Jun 2019

I don't know which I prefer, Richard. Both are attractive. But I hope the little bird doesn't get left behind! Rhiannon

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Posted in Left Behind 2

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