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I imagined you lying looking
Posted on Sun, 28 Jul 2019
I imagined you lying looking in drowsy sunshine down through the grasses and leaves to the trickling stream in the first verse. And the contrast of the black beetles gave a good reading effect!
I suppose afterwards you are comparing the...
Read full commentPosted in grass/july
There has been a lot of
Posted on Fri, 26 Jul 2019
There has been a lot of interest in encouraging the use of the language more and has given interest to schools using both languages. I grew up on the east side of Wales (Barry in the south, and Wrexham in the north), but then had some time out...
Read full commentPosted in Welcome In Welsh
Quite a thought-provoking
Posted on Sat, 27 Jul 2019
Quite a thought-provoking rant – the ease of popular belligerence over fair assessment of all sides of issues, and of the characters of all involved and their mixtures of good and poor motives. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Never Satisfied
I liked the feeling/picture
Posted on Fri, 28 Jun 2019
I liked the feeling/picture of morning-family rush. I wasn't sure of the meaning of the last verse! Sorry. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in The Best
Is it meant to be 'bathroom'
Posted on Fri, 28 Jun 2019
Is it meant to be 'bathroom' in line 4, Richard? Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in The Best
Interesting description of
Posted on Sun, 23 Jun 2019
Interesting description of 'make-up'! and of the beauty from within which isn't deceptive or fleeting (Proverbs 31:30), and is a by-product of honouring God, and trustworthiness and a caring nature. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Blossom So Divine
You make a striking
Posted on Mon, 17 Jun 2019
You make a striking visualisation of a 'protective', inevitable hardness, not to be hurt, and likewise bound to hurt each other.
Came to mind Proverbs 27:17: 'As iron sharpens iron, so one man sharpens another.' which has always impressed...
Read full commentPosted in We are Rocks
A lot of useful metaphor
Posted on Fri, 14 Jun 2019
A lot of useful metaphor going on here, Graham. Ties in with the parable again (though he did repent, just in time).
Fields of Gold are sewn With dreams corrupt The precious yellow fever Is hard to swallow Broken teeth, broken dreams...
Read full commentPosted in Greed For Gold
Is this autobiographical? A
Posted on Tue, 11 Jun 2019
Is this autobiographical? A broken back? A wolf? Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in The Rain
I don't know which I prefer,
Posted on Thu, 06 Jun 2019
I don't know which I prefer, Richard. Both are attractive. But I hope the little bird doesn't get left behind! Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Left Behind 2
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