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I have 2037 stories published in 16 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 4283252 times and 630 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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Cherry

20

… But now I’ve reached 20 – I think that that’s plenty!

19

‘Straightforwardness’ is a word that …

In Bethlehem, long before …

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] A stranger poor, she could but glean, on charity dependent, her faithful kindness had been seen, received...
Cherry

18

In Welsh the word for 18 is ‘two-nines’ (deunaw) in the Breton language it is ‘three-sixes’ (triwec’h) …
Cherry

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Haiku example: 'Winter life withdrawn, safely shielded from the cold …'

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1493 of my comments have received 1536 Great Feedback votes

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The frustrations of life can

Posted on Mon, 11 Feb 2019

The frustrations of life can give a false picture of the past, but also a looking for a false kind of utopia, and missing what can be now, and the hope of better that can be.

Meanwhile inventions that have been and are beneficial will...

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Posted in driverless

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I hadn't heard they might be

Posted on Fri, 08 Feb 2019

I hadn't heard they might be useful nectar sources of bees. I have written a couple of shorties about them in the past, on the cheeriness when they open after drizzle has stopped and along the roadside as 'dandy lions'! Rhiannon

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Posted in Dandelions

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Written so realistically. So

Posted on Mon, 04 Feb 2019

Written so realistically. So sad, because so easily can grip and grow. I remember my father talking me through a 'prayer ritual' I'd got into, and showing the two extremes neither of which were true prayer. So, I can see how this could happen....

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Posted in Bedtime Rituals

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How much  metaphor you've got

Posted on Sun, 03 Feb 2019

How much  metaphor you've got going there for the life history of those eggs! I've assumed RV stands for Recreational Vehicle ie Camper Van as the home of the developing embryos? as they develop in a largo state before their allegro and tempo...

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Posted in RV

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 A good place to start. And

Posted on Fri, 01 Feb 2019

 A good place to start. And sometimes writing it more helpful than trying to talk,for that always seems to need a response, and on meeting, just a touch, and maybe praying together. Rhiannon

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Posted in To my wife

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Thank you, Morkath, yes, that

Posted on Fri, 25 Jan 2019

Thank you, Morkath, yes, that was what I wanted to particularly emphasise – real listening that is'nt just waiting to jump in, has to be 'worked at', learned. Sometimes something is said you want to respond to, and you can miss the other things...

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Posted in the art of … listening

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Hi, Hilary. Well-written

Posted on Wed, 23 Jan 2019

Hi, Hilary. Well-written challenge.

I do have to balance in my mind the need for all of us individually, and in political pressures, the fact of sometimes conflicts of concerns needing attention with study of how to help some really poor...

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Posted in The Melting Iceberg

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A smooth and thoughtully

Posted on Wed, 16 Jan 2019

A smooth and thoughtully constructed overview of your personal view back. Really gives the feel of that look along the lane of lifetime, which becomes more interesting to do as the view gets longer, seeing the relative position of events and...

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Posted in Down Memory Lane

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You write in a dreamy and

Posted on Sat, 12 Jan 2019

You write in a dreamy and lyrical way, and the idea of wandering among the galaxies or shooting directly through like a neutrino is pleasant!

The very concept of time breaks down for me as unimaginable distances and chronological time...

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Posted in Watch This Space

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I'm not sure whether there is

Posted on Mon, 07 Jan 2019

I'm not sure whether there is smoke associated with oil production, though I suppose some when used as a fuel. What I remember more is the smoke when the wells were set alight deliberately in the Kuwait war, and I think by Isis more recently....

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Posted in hard and fast and shiny

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