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I have 2147 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
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Preparation

Cooler days dimmer light sap retracted, out of sight; recall of food from leaves (flesh shrunk – leaf stems sealed leaves wither, dehydrated...
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Hindrances to Harvest

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Time to sow, and time to reap – promised; but there’s need, we weep – war prevents and malice spoils...
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Field Bindweed

Little pink and white soft striped trumpets ‘necklaces’ brightening up the verge like marsh-mallow treats dotted here and there smiling, skitteriing...
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Getting the treasure!

Parable about God’s kingdom: like a treasure in a field …
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Shiny treasure

Spikey case around soft mattress cushioning the conker’s fall shining polished horse-chestnut ball copper gloss that brightens up child’s gaze of...
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1542 of my comments have received 1588 Great Feedback votes

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Is it meant to be 'bathroom'

Posted on Fri, 28 Jun 2019

Is it meant to be 'bathroom' in line 4, Richard? Rhiannon

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Posted in The Best

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Interesting description of

Posted on Sun, 23 Jun 2019

Interesting description of 'make-up'! and of the beauty from within which isn't deceptive or fleeting (Proverbs 31:30), and is a by-product of honouring God, and trustworthiness and a caring nature. Rhiannon

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Posted in Blossom So Divine

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You make a striking

Posted on Mon, 17 Jun 2019

You make a striking visualisation of a 'protective', inevitable hardness, not to be hurt, and likewise bound to hurt each other.

Came to mind Proverbs 27:17: 'As iron sharpens iron, so one man sharpens another.' which has always impressed...

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Posted in We are Rocks

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A lot of useful metaphor

Posted on Fri, 14 Jun 2019

A lot of useful metaphor going on here, Graham. Ties in with the parable again (though he did repent, just in time).

Fields of Gold are sewn With dreams corrupt The precious yellow fever Is hard to swallow Broken teeth, broken dreams...

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Posted in Greed For Gold

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Is this autobiographical? A

Posted on Tue, 11 Jun 2019

Is this autobiographical? A broken back? A wolf? Rhiannon

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Posted in The Rain

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I don't know which I prefer,

Posted on Thu, 06 Jun 2019

I don't know which I prefer, Richard. Both are attractive. But I hope the little bird doesn't get left behind! Rhiannon

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Posted in Left Behind 2

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Very telling. And what after

Posted on Thu, 06 Jun 2019

Very telling. And what after all are hair/eye colours, even possible intellectual abilities? What of the child's needs when they are going to be awkward and need helpful direction and training to deal with their tempers and teenage angsts. The...

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Posted in Return To Sender

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I'm all for trying to reverse

Posted on Tue, 04 Jun 2019

I'm all for trying to reverse bad trends of unnecessary messing up of our earth for greed. But 'If only for this life we have hope in Christ, we are to be pitied more than all men'* and denying children the knowledge of that hope in the troubles...

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Posted in the train leaving now

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A helpful testimony to the

Posted on Mon, 03 Jun 2019

A helpful testimony to the true definition of love versus shallow, glitzi, lusting 'love', that is so transient and can hurt many easily.Worth working at it in all the ups and downs! Rhiannon

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Posted in Loving You

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Thank you for highlighting

Posted on Mon, 03 Jun 2019

Thank you for highlighting this. I had to google the lyrics as I find it difficult to pick up all the words just listening!

Though some might just 'find religion' or think it will forward their release to say so and maybe just pretend and...

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Posted in Zach Williams Live From Harding Prison Chain Breaker And No Longer Slaves.

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