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Thrill

By Rhiannonw on Mon, 12 Dec 2022

What a surprise … It looks like we’ve seen in books. What funny stuff! Is it enough …

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Afterglow

By Rhiannonw on Fri, 09 Dec 2022

Twigs stretching high to scratch the sky, sun’s remaining red hue across the deepening evening blue …

Nature

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Your accent tells …

By Rhiannonw on Tue, 06 Dec 2022

They know I’m not English and ask if I’m Irish, and when that fails, they think of Wales.… …are we Wenglish? …

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Autumn carpets

By Rhiannonw on Tue, 29 Nov 2022

Autumn carpets don’t last long, bright colour splashes turn to brown then once more the trees get battered by gales, remaining leaves released and...

Nature

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I liked the feeling/picture

Posted on Fri, 28 Jun 2019

I liked the feeling/picture of morning-family rush. I wasn't sure of the meaning of the last verse! Sorry. Rhiannon

Posted in The Best

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Is it meant to be 'bathroom'

Posted on Fri, 28 Jun 2019

Is it meant to be 'bathroom' in line 4, Richard? Rhiannon

Posted in The Best

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Interesting description of

Posted on Sun, 23 Jun 2019

Interesting description of 'make-up'! and of the beauty from within which isn't deceptive or fleeting (Proverbs 31:30), and is a by-product of honouring God, and trustworthiness and a caring nature. Rhiannon

Posted in Blossom So Divine

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You make a striking

Posted on Mon, 17 Jun 2019

You make a striking visualisation of a 'protective', inevitable hardness, not to be hurt, and likewise bound to hurt each other.

Came to mind Proverbs 27:17: 'As iron sharpens iron, so one man sharpens another.' which has always impressed...

Posted in We are Rocks

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A lot of useful metaphor

Posted on Fri, 14 Jun 2019

A lot of useful metaphor going on here, Graham. Ties in with the parable again (though he did repent, just in time).

Fields of Gold are sewn With dreams corrupt The precious yellow fever Is hard to swallow Broken teeth, broken dreams...

Posted in Greed For Gold

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Is this autobiographical? A

Posted on Tue, 11 Jun 2019

Is this autobiographical? A broken back? A wolf? Rhiannon

Posted in The Rain

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I don't know which I prefer,

Posted on Thu, 06 Jun 2019

I don't know which I prefer, Richard. Both are attractive. But I hope the little bird doesn't get left behind! Rhiannon

Posted in Left Behind 2

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Very telling. And what after

Posted on Thu, 06 Jun 2019

Very telling. And what after all are hair/eye colours, even possible intellectual abilities? What of the child's needs when they are going to be awkward and need helpful direction and training to deal with their tempers and teenage angsts. The...

Posted in Return To Sender

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I'm all for trying to reverse

Posted on Tue, 04 Jun 2019

I'm all for trying to reverse bad trends of unnecessary messing up of our earth for greed. But 'If only for this life we have hope in Christ, we are to be pitied more than all men'* and denying children the knowledge of that hope in the troubles...

Posted in the train leaving now

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A helpful testimony to the

Posted on Mon, 03 Jun 2019

A helpful testimony to the true definition of love versus shallow, glitzi, lusting 'love', that is so transient and can hurt many easily.Worth working at it in all the ups and downs! Rhiannon