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I have 2164 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 5614611 times and 680 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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Golden Valley* in October

“ Golden Valley*”: wide, bright green fields, but misty mysterious, atmospheric this day. Far hills, sentinels, peer over from beyond. Up on the...
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Justification?

“It said, ‘Help Yourself’ “ said the burglar, “ – the sign said ‘Take away’, and nowhere, anywhere did it say to go to the cash-till to pay!” “I’m...
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Rejecting — what?

… And yet, your love O LORD is great, complete your faithfulness …
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Above Old Downton Lodge

– nice to so quickly get on top of the world! …
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1550 of my comments have received 1599 Great Feedback votes

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Is it worth removing some by

Posted on Tue, 21 May 2019

Is it worth removing some by hand!!. Will be interesting to see how well the lillies to survive. Rhiannon

typo in line 5 'shall'?

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Posted in I Didn't Kill the Scarlet Beetles

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The photo and your writing

Posted on Tue, 21 May 2019

The photo and your writing brings to thought this 'house through time' again, the worn steps used by so many. Rhiannon

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Posted in How Many Steps

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A relaxing picture, peaceful

Posted on Sun, 19 May 2019

A relaxing picture, peaceful except for the wind and waves! Rhiannon

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Posted in At Lake Babine BC

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A lovely first verse! Your

Posted on Mon, 13 May 2019

A lovely first verse! Your second verse is deliberately contrastingly bleak, I presume to contrast consumerism-living with the wealth of the peace and beauty of creation we have to enjoy. I don't think that it is that the wealthy that would have...

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Posted in bluebells

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How veru interesting that the

Posted on Tue, 07 May 2019

How very interesting that the puzzle of those precise measurements in the vision led you to contemplate the precision of the creation. I studied biochemistry (a long time ago!) and was amazed at the detail of how things work together precisely...

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Posted in Precision.

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As Penny4athought says, you

Posted on Sun, 05 May 2019

As Penny4athought says, you describe so effectively the shock of the tumble, and the pain, and the instinctive response of the believer of thankfulness for life spared, and then the awareness of need of help in the pain. He doesn't take away all...

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Posted in There's Something

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The one you found a rock gone

Posted on Tue, 30 Apr 2019

The one you found a rock gone, but the 'sand' left in its wake still gives steadiness? A rock having barnacles from life's bruises, but also thrift joy bubbling out is an evocative picture. Rhiannon

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Posted in rock

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Another brief and neat

Posted on Sun, 28 Apr 2019

Another brief and neat thoughtful little one. Interesting that with all the desperate situations, some of the slaves must have been happier than some of the masters, because of knowing God's comfort, and some slave-master relationships developed...

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Posted in These Ain't No Daisy Chains

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A perceptive little one.

Posted on Sun, 28 Apr 2019

A perceptive little one. Interesting comment on the effect of drudgery encouraging temptation. And the play on mourning/morning. Actually in that 4th line from the end , I suspect you don't want the 'is' in the line? Rhiannon

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Posted in Wish YOU were here

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Very moving, Graham. The fact

Posted on Sat, 27 Apr 2019

Very moving, Graham. The fact that she could talk out to you at least shows she valued you, even though probably aware that the closeness was lost at present, and also probably had satisfaction that your life was working out reasonably. And would...

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Posted in One Chance And I Blew It

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