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Thank you, Hilary! I hope you
Posted on Fri, 29 Mar 2019
Thank you, Hilary! I hope you are well. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Colours for Kids 7)
agree with the other two
Posted on Thu, 28 Mar 2019
agree with the other two comments, a privilege to have experiened the sight and escape from time and chore with you! I especially liked 'wheeling wings flashing, never crashing, like glitter in a snow globe shook'
Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in herring gull gallantry
Well, at least it seems to
Posted on Wed, 27 Mar 2019
Well, at least it seems to blend in with some other colours in the sunset and flame and give a warming glow. (Actually if you want to be leagalisitc I expect you shouldn't have mentioned a second colour!). I was struggling with doing 'orange' in...
Read full commentPosted in Orange
To speak out when right and
Posted on Sat, 23 Mar 2019
To speak out when right and necessary with honour but not malice is not easy, but much more productive. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in I WAS BORN
Oh, I enjoyed this too, Di!
Posted on Fri, 22 Mar 2019
Oh, I enjoyed this too, Di! There is something so bright about gorse's yellow, if you bother to get close. And almost always has some flowers, and sometimes a great mass shining in the sun. You even bring out the scent and softness (such a...
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Thank you, Richard. I had
Posted on Wed, 20 Mar 2019
Thank you, Richard. I had seen it, but hadn't decided on a suitable reply! I hope to print it out very big, and take it to her soon. I hope it will touch her spirit when worried muddled up memories feel overwhelming, and help her to let go, and...
Read full commentPosted in A Poem for Eleanor
That's a lovely picture of
Posted on Sun, 17 Mar 2019
That's a lovely picture of memories.
I have a mother-in-law in a nursing home who is troubled a lot by troubled dreams, which seem to have their roots in a life of fears and worries and anger that she suppressed and now has partially...
Read full commentPosted in This Older Man
It's quite fun to play around
Posted on Tue, 12 Mar 2019
It's quite fun to play around with rhymes in this way, isn't it? Not to make them too lumpy, and try to see how they help to keep a rhythm going. I liked the 'blob'! And you've brought in a lot about the feelings of the situation. The form does...
Read full commentPosted in Last Week I Lost My Job (Rimus Dissolutas)
Quirky bit of fun! Rhiannon
Posted on Mon, 04 Mar 2019
Quirky bit of fun! Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Conversation of a Tree
No, really, that's all very
Posted on Mon, 25 Feb 2019
No, really, that's all very interesting. The focussing on one thing not the general view I've noticed in other ways. I do think that being yourself and knowing you are concerned when someone is upset, is far better and appreciated than rushing...
Read full commentPosted in The Love of the Loveless (Chapter 2) (3)
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