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Golden Valley* in October
“ Golden Valley*”: wide, bright green fields, but misty mysterious, atmospheric this day. Far hills, sentinels, peer over from beyond. Up on the...
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Justification?
“It said, ‘Help Yourself’ “ said the burglar, “ – the sign said ‘Take away’, and nowhere, anywhere did it say to go to the cash-till to pay!” “I’m...
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Rejecting — what?
… And yet, your love O LORD is great, complete your faithfulness …
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My ways they are a-changing!
… ‘Interesting times’, said the woodworm …
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Above Old Downton Lodge
– nice to so quickly get on top of the world! …
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You have managed to capture
Posted on Wed, 07 Aug 2019
You have managed to capture the remoteness and wild bleakness of the area, while also bringing attention to the life of the intertidal estuary itself and the birdlife and song of the rushy edges. Thank you. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Tentacled Lagoon Worm
I liked this too, Richard.
Posted on Thu, 08 Aug 2019
I liked this too, Richard. The scene now, and the description of the crawling, shooting-up legs, and then their owners looking back, as you are now. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in The Porch
I enjoyed the vivid scene
Posted on Wed, 07 Aug 2019
I enjoyed the vivid scene created. The last phrase seemed to fit the picture of the ocean fiercly slapping and pounding the shore, while the movement of crustaceans seems a still, slow quiet contrast! Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in This Tide of Ocean
Interesting compact
Posted on Thu, 01 Aug 2019
Interesting compact composition poetically and biologically! Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Rubatosis
Neat! and reminiscent of
Posted on Thu, 01 Aug 2019
Neat! and reminiscent of other tangles of beaurocracy and paperwork these days! My father-in-law used to be pleased to say how he hadn't got a passport, had never had a driving licence,and now lived with us so didn't have any utility bills, and...
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We enjoy holidaying in North
Posted on Sun, 28 Jul 2019
We enjoy holidaying in North Pembrokeshire and walking the coastal path (no children now!), and were surprised when walking down near Broad Haven this year at the sight of all the tankers anchored around the bay - it seemed quite a way to Milford...
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I imagined you lying looking
Posted on Sun, 28 Jul 2019
I imagined you lying looking in drowsy sunshine down through the grasses and leaves to the trickling stream in the first verse. And the contrast of the black beetles gave a good reading effect!
I suppose afterwards you are comparing the...
Read full commentPosted in grass/july
There has been a lot of
Posted on Fri, 26 Jul 2019
There has been a lot of interest in encouraging the use of the language more and has given interest to schools using both languages. I grew up on the east side of Wales (Barry in the south, and Wrexham in the north), but then had some time out...
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Quite a thought-provoking
Posted on Sat, 27 Jul 2019
Quite a thought-provoking rant – the ease of popular belligerence over fair assessment of all sides of issues, and of the characters of all involved and their mixtures of good and poor motives. Rhiannon
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I liked the feeling/picture
Posted on Fri, 28 Jun 2019
I liked the feeling/picture of morning-family rush. I wasn't sure of the meaning of the last verse! Sorry. Rhiannon
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