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I have 2034 stories published in 16 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 4258274 times and 630 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1490 of my 13,057 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1533 votes

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Relationship

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] “Immanuel” means “God with us” – to you is he a stranger? He wants a real relationship, so came, lay in a...
Cherry

Turn of the year ’scape

Scrawny trees stark on pale clear sky tangled twigs and mistletoe orbs; jaded damp sodden turf, wintery stillnes ’til sudden stormy shake of blasting...
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Journeying

What difference made by passing gong? … our foolish fritterings don’t repeat.
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Cherry

Spaceship Food

a rework of a piece for an IP a long time ago on ‘Skeuomorphism'*
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Why Bethlehem's remembered

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Now Bethlehem’s remembered throughout the ages vast, for there the Prince was born whose just government...

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1490 of my comments have received 1533 Great Feedback votes

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Thank you, Graham. I did read

Posted on Thu, 04 Apr 2019

Thank you, Graham. I did read of your tender memories at her passing. My mother-in-law has always been kind and gracious in manner, but it was so hard to feel as if the door of her face was shut to 'catching her eye' and being really able to...

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Posted in The mask melting at 98

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How ridiculous, and how sad!

Posted on Thu, 04 Apr 2019

How ridiculous, and how sad! If they only realised that the cross is not only true, but representing a loving sacrifice being offered to all, however diverse they feel. And of such a more far-reaching gift than a chick, daffodil or chocolate egg...

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Posted in Happy Easter.

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and the essence of the full

Posted on Fri, 05 Apr 2019

and the essence of the full hopping 'word' there in the tiny 'dot' already! Enjoyed your description, as you must have enjoyed wagtching! Rhiannon

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Posted in pondering

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Very rich.The growth and

Posted on Thu, 04 Apr 2019

Very rich.The growth and colours increasing, returning. 

I liked the first verse especially, with the comparison of the pollened willow catkins to his stars . and Sun-coin's cloud-pursed

Still mulling over the syrup and...

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Posted in First Walk Of April

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Thank you, Hilary! I hope you

Posted on Fri, 29 Mar 2019

Thank you, Hilary! I hope you are well. Rhiannon

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Posted in Colours for Kids 7)

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agree with the other two

Posted on Thu, 28 Mar 2019

agree with the other two comments, a privilege to have experiened the sight and escape from time and chore with you!  I especially liked 'wheeling wings flashing, never crashing, like glitter in a snow globe shook'

Rhiannon

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Posted in herring gull gallantry

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Well, at least it seems to

Posted on Wed, 27 Mar 2019

Well, at least it seems to blend in with some other colours in the sunset and flame and give a warming glow. (Actually if you want to be leagalisitc I expect you shouldn't have mentioned a second colour!). I was struggling with doing 'orange' in...

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Posted in Orange

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To speak out when right and

Posted on Sat, 23 Mar 2019

To speak out when right and necessary with honour but not malice is not easy, but much more productive. Rhiannon

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Posted in I WAS BORN

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Oh, I enjoyed this too, Di!

Posted on Fri, 22 Mar 2019

Oh, I enjoyed this too, Di! There is something so bright about gorse's yellow, if you bother to get close. And almost always has some flowers, and sometimes a great mass shining in the sun. You even bring out the scent and softness (such a...

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Posted in gorse

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Thank you, Richard. I had

Posted on Wed, 20 Mar 2019

Thank you, Richard. I had seen it, but hadn't decided on a suitable reply! I hope to print it out very big, and take it to her soon. I hope it will touch her spirit when worried muddled up memories feel overwhelming, and help her to let go, and...

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Posted in A Poem for Eleanor

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