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I have 2147 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 5462305 times and 674 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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Remembrance and prayer …

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Remembering conflicts past and bitter remembering those who died so better life ahead for others’ …Remembering present vile invasions …
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Guard!!

Fire, fire burning bright in the forest day and night damaging the national park – from where came igniting spark? … ( with apologies to William Blake)
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November 5

Fizzing fireworks brief and bright red and orange, gold and white, rocket, catherine wheel and candle, silent sparklers – carrot handle for the metal...
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Jesus touched the leper

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] He came and begged on bended knee, with great desire, humility, believing Christ’s ability: Christ touched...

Aging Glow

Rosy glow in old age appearing …
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1542 of my comments have received 1588 Great Feedback votes

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You bring the walk to life

Posted on Sun, 13 Oct 2019

You bring the walk to life for all the senses! And encourage to notice all the little things around, with interest and pleasure. On Saturday we were on the hills (also without rain!) and encountered a little group of cubs and their leaders, the...

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Posted in Nature's Ambiance

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Thankyou, Di, very much.

Posted on Wed, 09 Oct 2019

Thankyou, Di, very much.

No, I don't remember all of the origins and occasions of my writing. But there are some things that stick a bit, and occasions I have long remembered certain words or phrases coming to complete a line better etc,...

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Posted in That’s where I was when I wrote it down …!

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Don't worry about anything,

Posted on Mon, 07 Oct 2019

Don't worry about anything, just wondered about the 'peel' in the last line, but I think I see itis probably that enclosing the words/thoughts that they need to escape from, or basically the same as the vowels colouring - which I hadn't thought...

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Posted in appeal

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A clever interweaving,

Posted on Mon, 07 Oct 2019

A clever interweaving, flowing of these linked beautiful shades. I wasn't sure I understood the last line correctly. As there's no full-stop, I wondered if it is finished? [Appeal - a peel: pun?] Rhiannon

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I do like the noticing of the

Posted on Tue, 24 Sep 2019

I do like the noticing of the quivering of the bush full of little birds. And also, the 'now, now' of just one more when sampling! The clotting in the bag broiught back memories too!

And I do admire you for making jam. I've never had a go...

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Posted in recipe

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How an umbrella makes a walk

Posted on Sun, 22 Sep 2019

How an umbrella makes a walk in the rain enjoyable and enables the viewing of all that is around outside our bubble of shelter! You took me with you on your refreshing stroll. Rhiannon

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Posted in Cocktail Of Clouds And Rain

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I liked the tumbling hues you

Posted on Sun, 22 Sep 2019

I liked the tumbling hues you've brought in, and the idea of 'linger-lapse of time'. And the 'sudden chilled October’s dawn' of which we have had a few tastes already. Evocative and concentrated. Rhiannon

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Posted in light’s linger-lapse of time

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Those branches do weave out

Posted on Sat, 21 Sep 2019

Those branches do weave out to tangle and trip don't they? But yes, a lovely autumn wreath. We have had an abundant supply of large juicy ones just down a 'twitten' from the end of our little lane, sprouting out from behind the buildings of an...

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Posted in brambles

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Fun memories, Jean! Teenage

Posted on Fri, 20 Sep 2019

Fun memories, Jean! Teenage years very trying for girls and boys, and often pushed into 'pairings' before they're ready, when a looser group socialising would be helpful, to get to know each other and how to communicate and be friends and...

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Posted in The Men in my Life - part 1

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I thought the beginning like

Posted on Sun, 15 Sep 2019

I thought the beginning like a painting and visualised you sitting on the doorstep seeing the scene of sky and sea. I wonder if the slight pull of the earth's magnetism guides them on their long migration?

And then turning to watch the...

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Posted in wings, late summer

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