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Let the Blue through!
Blue light flashes Woo-woo! Woo-woo! Woo-woo! …Blue lights once more flashing by… Again see blue lights flash, but why …
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One dies, but lives, one saved to serve longer
… off the chains fell, the gateway then opened by God’s mighty will …
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Under his hat
Culinary mixtures, and complementary flavours; anthropomorphical avant-garde creative creature: ‘hair-raising’ mentor (or ‘puppeteer’?) (look under...
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His work in the heart
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Hardened hearts won’t learn God’s wisdom:… I was limp like empty glove till He entered with his love.
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For whose benefit …?
discreet … ostentatious … displays for praise … generous … parsimonious … discreet … to ease distress — which giver is blest more than the receiver?
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Rhyme gets a bad press
Posted on Wed, 08 Jan 2020
Rhyme gets a bad press because of forced rhymes and poor rhythm that can really be doggerel. For those of us who use rhymeing quite a lot we know it can not only be satisfying, but helpful when used to help the rhythm and the impact. Similarly,...
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Good to share your
Posted on Tue, 07 Jan 2020
Good to share your investigations, Luigi! and the point made here somehow of the different approach to rhythm, and having to decide on how long is best for the content you have. The idea of the coda to 'round off' is interesting too. I wonder how...
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Interesting last verse
Posted on Sun, 05 Jan 2020
Interesting last verse thought of unwrapping suprising ideas in your mind, and the excitment of developing them creatively, and that that is possible despite shortcomings and aging! Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Woman In The Mirror
It's hard to be
Posted on Thu, 26 Dec 2019
It's hard to be misunderstood and misjudged, isn't it? Praying to accept criticism that is right and grace to benefit from it, and respond graciously when criticism seems wrong and mistaken but not possible to persuade! Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Dear Jesus
yes, much interesting
Posted on Fri, 20 Dec 2019
yes, much interesting interplaying imagery - I like the 'wind stripped trees' and the cool of the darkening evening. Also the touch and contrast of warmth drawing to the homes.
But I'm glad that Man's hubris isn't ultimately going to be...
Read full commentPosted in woods, late
I too couldn't see what this
Posted on Sat, 14 Dec 2019
I too couldn't see what this was about at first. The line that stands out to me is You didn't have to go,
and the sense of why there hadn't been more sharing and acceptance of help many can't now give, had no opportunity probably...
Read full commentPosted in The Worst
Again, thank you for
Posted on Sun, 08 Dec 2019
Again, thank you for highlighting this wonderful incident,recorded in John chapter 9, and so straight-forwardly. Good 'food for thought' on a Sunday morning.
I did also a little while ago do a song on it! greetings, Rhiannon
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No, only here on ABC as in
Posted on Thu, 05 Dec 2019
No, only here on ABC as in the link. In the past I've occasionally sung them on to Soundcloud, but not recently! Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Let Him Who Is Without Sin Cast The First Stone.
Thank you for posting this,
Posted on Thu, 05 Dec 2019
Thank you for posting this, you've described it well. I did a song on this for my 'songs for Sunday' series, based on a helpful message we'd had in church. Rhiannon
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Mary never claimed to be
Posted on Thu, 05 Dec 2019
Mary never claimed to be without sin, and called God her Saviour (Luke 1;47). She also was not a virgin after Jesus' birth, had his brothers naturally. Rhiannon
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