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Light-Cycle
December weak light, January, bleak light, spring light increasing: warm, life-awakening … never none – … but never too far, deep-freezing, never too near, frizzling.
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Temperate December, variations
Dark, mild … dripping trees … wan white sun … stillness. Whirling whiteness … Bright sun, azure sky … vivid dark shadows … Downpour crashing …
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The Whole Advent Calendar December 2022
[I have often attempted some sort of Advent Calendar in December. Last year it was just on each day-number, others have attempted the background to the birth in the manger. This year I've attempted verse again on the numbers of the days, but drawing out some significance from the Bible history, all in brief limerick form. Limerick form was not used to indicate humour, but as a form to make a catchy brief point.] I've now combined the 25 individual days, and of course lost a few comments.
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Feast
Celebrating Messiah’s birth, or family time for relaxation, jollity and mirth – but will excess bring weariness, fractiousness, and dearth of cash and joy in January? [IP: on …
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The Amazing Molecule!
Surprising simple structure bafflingly suitable properties unusual medium essential for living cells for transportations and chemical reactions … and lighter when frozen … don’t stand on that ice until you know it’s thick enough, tough enough! But how is there so much on earth? …
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So sad that there should be
Posted on Thu, 23 Jan 2020
So sad that there should be such hatred for Christ. Pray that such a death would actually prompt some to seek the God he served and who upheld him, and upholds those who remain. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Do You Know Who I Am?
What wonderful truth, and
Posted on Thu, 23 Jan 2020
What wonderful truth, and love, and so tragic that so many don't think about it, reject without thought, pray that many eyes and minds will be cleared to 'see' and receive! Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Do You Know Who I Am? Part Two.
You always have a musical
Posted on Sun, 12 Jan 2020
You always have a musical flow of words, Nolan, though very concentrated, personal, and enigmatic in the sense that there seems to be much background thinking linking it all. The Bible verse seems to give the key here of the mixture of patience...
Read full commentPosted in faithful to the dream
Rhyme gets a bad press
Posted on Wed, 08 Jan 2020
Rhyme gets a bad press because of forced rhymes and poor rhythm that can really be doggerel. For those of us who use rhymeing quite a lot we know it can not only be satisfying, but helpful when used to help the rhythm and the impact. Similarly,...
Read full commentPosted in A Dog's Dinner
Good to share your
Posted on Tue, 07 Jan 2020
Good to share your investigations, Luigi! and the point made here somehow of the different approach to rhythm, and having to decide on how long is best for the content you have. The idea of the coda to 'round off' is interesting too. I wonder how...
Read full commentPosted in A Chōka Poem
Interesting last verse
Posted on Sun, 05 Jan 2020
Interesting last verse thought of unwrapping suprising ideas in your mind, and the excitment of developing them creatively, and that that is possible despite shortcomings and aging! Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Woman In The Mirror
It's hard to be
Posted on Thu, 26 Dec 2019
It's hard to be misunderstood and misjudged, isn't it? Praying to accept criticism that is right and grace to benefit from it, and respond graciously when criticism seems wrong and mistaken but not possible to persuade! Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Dear Jesus
yes, much interesting
Posted on Fri, 20 Dec 2019
yes, much interesting interplaying imagery - I like the 'wind stripped trees' and the cool of the darkening evening. Also the touch and contrast of warmth drawing to the homes.
But I'm glad that Man's hubris isn't ultimately going to be...
Read full commentPosted in woods, late
I too couldn't see what this
Posted on Sat, 14 Dec 2019
I too couldn't see what this was about at first. The line that stands out to me is You didn't have to go,
and the sense of why there hadn't been more sharing and acceptance of help many can't now give, had no opportunity probably...
Read full commentPosted in The Worst
Again, thank you for
Posted on Sun, 08 Dec 2019
Again, thank you for highlighting this wonderful incident,recorded in John chapter 9, and so straight-forwardly. Good 'food for thought' on a Sunday morning.
I did also a little while ago do a song on it! greetings, Rhiannon
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