Justification?

By Rhiannonw

Mon, 24 Oct 2022
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8 comments
 

“It said, ‘Help Yourself’ “ said the burglar,
“ – the sign said ‘Take away’,
and nowhere, anywhere did it say
to go to the cash-till to pay!”

“I’m trying a bit of self-help to save
those searching me jobs to do.
I’m serving myself and that should help you,
– no need to support me too.”

[IP: Self-help] [Maybe this needs a follow-up story!]

 

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Inspiration Point (work that responds to our weekly writing cue)

Comments

Submitted by marandina on

The moral hazards of burglary. Looking forward to the follow up story if you do one. Enjoyed your poem, Rhiannon. Paul :) 

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you, Paul. I was reminded of one of my children when he had just learnt to read, puzzled by signs like that in a shop! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by hilary west on

Hi Rhiannon,

Humourous take on the IP. Where would we be if we took everything literally !!!?

hilary   smiley

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks! Another of my children had a tendency to take idiomatic language literally, which was quite funny. I remember the doctor telling him he could leap on to the couch - he looked surprised and did a big leap!

Rhiannon

 

Submitted by jeand on

Hi Rhiannon

Nice little poem.  I think a follow up would be nice.

Jean Day

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks, Jean. Is the comment below meant for you piece? Rhianno

 

Submitted by jeand on

THANK YOU EDITORS FOR THE CHERRIES.

Jean Day

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

I think this was meant for your piece, Jean! Rhiannon