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I agree with Paul, communing
Posted on Fri, 15 Jan 2021
I agree with Paul, communing with trees is not a waste of time. When I spend time hugging the trunk I think of messages being sent down to the roots that someone cares...maybe it's my imagination, but always worth the while.
There's a pensive stillness to your poem, a need to retreat. Being touched by sadness can inspire so many emotions which are clearly written within your writing.
I was so sorry to hear of you loosing a close friend.
I found the warmth in your poem with the cat streching out on the rug, and the armchair by the living flame turning from blue to orange, the radio telling a story while it's cold and wild outside.
Interesting poem Rachel. It always amazes me just how clever the robin is, it's as if they have a sixth sense, and although very terroitorial, they seem to have a special bond with humans, especially when they know you're gardening and digging...
Little ones can teach us adults so much don't you think? That all important effort and concentration of placing those shaped cubes in the box and deriving so much fun from doing the task, that there's a need to do it over and over again.
This poem is very much on my spiritual level Paul. The Winter Solstice will soon be upon us, when In the depths of winter we think about the shortest day and longest night. We light candles to remind us that the light will return in the Spring....
I agree with Paul, communing
Posted on Fri, 15 Jan 2021
I agree with Paul, communing with trees is not a waste of time. When I spend time hugging the trunk I think of messages being sent down to the roots that someone cares...maybe it's my imagination, but always worth the while.
I loved this...
Read full commentPosted in Apple Tree
There's a pensive stillness
Posted on Wed, 13 Jan 2021
There's a pensive stillness to your poem, a need to retreat. Being touched by sadness can inspire so many emotions which are clearly written within your writing.
I was so sorry to hear of you loosing a close friend.
I'm never quite...
Read full commentPosted in Oh, What’s That In The Hollow?
I was interested to read your
Posted on Tue, 05 Jan 2021
I was interested to read your poem. It's good to know they're keeping the cross restored and your poem keeps the memory alive.
Fascinating read.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Eleanor Cross
Love the explanation of a
Posted on Sun, 03 Jan 2021
Love the explanation of a perfect cup of coffee to revive those brain cells, ready to begin typing away and creating exciting new ideas.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in "A cup with a viewpoint"
Fascinating to read your
Posted on Sun, 03 Jan 2021
Fascinating to read your thoughts in this poem.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in "Time and Stardust"
Hi Paul,
Posted on Wed, 30 Dec 2020
Hi Paul,
you know I love Dennis Wheatley books with all that great reading that has you on the edge of your seat wanting more.
That last part was very intense and had me wondering whether they'd actually escape and get away. I like...
Read full commentPosted in Empire State (Part 7 of 7): Escape
I found the warmth in your
Posted on Mon, 21 Dec 2020
I found the warmth in your poem with the cat streching out on the rug, and the armchair by the living flame turning from blue to orange, the radio telling a story while it's cold and wild outside.
I think I could enjoy this scene, sounds...
Read full commentPosted in At Christmas
Interesting poem Rachel. It
Posted on Thu, 17 Dec 2020
Interesting poem Rachel. It always amazes me just how clever the robin is, it's as if they have a sixth sense, and although very terroitorial, they seem to have a special bond with humans, especially when they know you're gardening and digging...
Read full commentPosted in What The Robin Knows by Jon Young
Little ones can teach us
Posted on Tue, 15 Dec 2020
Little ones can teach us adults so much don't you think? That all important effort and concentration of placing those shaped cubes in the box and deriving so much fun from doing the task, that there's a need to do it over and over again.
...
Read full commentPosted in A new achievement @16 months
This poem is very much on my
Posted on Wed, 16 Dec 2020
This poem is very much on my spiritual level Paul. The Winter Solstice will soon be upon us, when In the depths of winter we think about the shortest day and longest night. We light candles to remind us that the light will return in the Spring....
Read full commentPosted in Hibernal Solstice
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