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Brad had been lost for words, but suddenly spoke up. “We really need to get out of here quickly, there's no telling when Gregor and his men will come...
For a long while they continued on down the tunnel. Simon began to worry as the owl had not returned, he doubted himself as a sudden cold breeze came...
2243 of my comments have received 2323 Great Feedback votes
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My heart goes out to you and
Posted on Mon, 31 May 2021
My heart goes out to you and anyone else in this situation. It makes you wonder why this Mr Hamill wasn't more helpful, then to go and charge such an extortionate amount of money for doing absolutely nothing apart from upsetting you is ridiculous...
I like how the I P triggered this story. Some people live extraordinary lives, Gaby comes across as quite bohemian in his demeanour, which always intrigues those who want to get to know him.
So many emotions to contend with, and challenges to confront when people come into lives and make a difference, then leave us feeling let down, yet all life experiences are given so we may learn from them, good or bad.
There is a personal message in this poem I feel. You've created a poem that suggests to me a fear of a broken world that you struggle to come to terms with.
I've probably got the poem completely wrong, but I think the lines:-
What a treasure to read that a writer has courage and is honest enough to speak up. I hope you've inspired others with this condition to move forward and take control.
I hope your positivity continues and all doubts pass.
Wonderful to read and I enjoyed the other characters too. Penny the donkey must have her hands full with Dylan and Jessica. I just love how you bring these animals to life.
My heart goes out to you and
Posted on Mon, 31 May 2021
My heart goes out to you and anyone else in this situation. It makes you wonder why this Mr Hamill wasn't more helpful, then to go and charge such an extortionate amount of money for doing absolutely nothing apart from upsetting you is ridiculous...
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I like how the I P triggered
Posted on Sun, 30 May 2021
I like how the I P triggered this story. Some people live extraordinary lives, Gaby comes across as quite bohemian in his demeanour, which always intrigues those who want to get to know him.
You gave him an air of mystery Luigi, that is...
Read full commentPosted in No More Waiting
So many emotions to contend
Posted on Sat, 29 May 2021
So many emotions to contend with, and challenges to confront when people come into lives and make a difference, then leave us feeling let down, yet all life experiences are given so we may learn from them, good or bad.
A touching read....
Read full commentPosted in The one that got away
Hi Paul,
Posted on Tue, 25 May 2021
Hi Paul,
it was nice to read a light hearted story that was so amusing.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Sure Yank Redemption
There is a personal message
Posted on Tue, 25 May 2021
There is a personal message in this poem I feel. You've created a poem that suggests to me a fear of a broken world that you struggle to come to terms with.
I've probably got the poem completely wrong, but I think the lines:-
Why...
Read full commentPosted in time flies
You capture the images of
Posted on Mon, 24 May 2021
You capture the images of memories that linger, while struggling with the harsh realities very well in this story.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in We're not in Kansas anymore!
And now I'm eager to know
Posted on Sun, 23 May 2021
And now I'm eager to know what's inside that package...I wait with anticipation.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Tail" 9
What a treasure to read that
Posted on Sat, 22 May 2021
What a treasure to read that a writer has courage and is honest enough to speak up. I hope you've inspired others with this condition to move forward and take control.
I hope your positivity continues and all doubts pass.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Schism: The Final Stretch and Freedom from Agrophobia
Such an engaging poem, full
Posted on Sun, 23 May 2021
Such an engaging poem, full of nature's appeal.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Sun-Light
Wonderful to read and I
Posted on Fri, 21 May 2021
Wonderful to read and I enjoyed the other characters too. Penny the donkey must have her hands full with Dylan and Jessica. I just love how you bring these animals to life.
Cheery read as always.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Baby Love?
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