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So many emotions to contend
Posted on Sat, 29 May 2021
So many emotions to contend with, and challenges to confront when people come into lives and make a difference, then leave us feeling let down, yet all life experiences are given so we may learn from them, good or bad.
There is a personal message in this poem I feel. You've created a poem that suggests to me a fear of a broken world that you struggle to come to terms with.
I've probably got the poem completely wrong, but I think the lines:-
What a treasure to read that a writer has courage and is honest enough to speak up. I hope you've inspired others with this condition to move forward and take control.
I hope your positivity continues and all doubts pass.
Wonderful to read and I enjoyed the other characters too. Penny the donkey must have her hands full with Dylan and Jessica. I just love how you bring these animals to life.
Maria's father was certainly a busy man, it must have been hard for him to take the criticism on his writing and publishing after all the hard work he put in. I hope his book of poetry did better, his poem on the Slavic people was fascinating to...
I like how you connect with the albatross with each stanza, like you feel an affinity with this bird. It must be so sad not to have at least one photo of yourself as a baby or young child to charge memories.
So many emotions to contend
Posted on Sat, 29 May 2021
So many emotions to contend with, and challenges to confront when people come into lives and make a difference, then leave us feeling let down, yet all life experiences are given so we may learn from them, good or bad.
A touching read....
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Hi Paul,
Posted on Tue, 25 May 2021
Hi Paul,
it was nice to read a light hearted story that was so amusing.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Sure Yank Redemption
There is a personal message
Posted on Tue, 25 May 2021
There is a personal message in this poem I feel. You've created a poem that suggests to me a fear of a broken world that you struggle to come to terms with.
I've probably got the poem completely wrong, but I think the lines:-
Why...
Read full commentPosted in time flies
You capture the images of
Posted on Mon, 24 May 2021
You capture the images of memories that linger, while struggling with the harsh realities very well in this story.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in We're not in Kansas anymore!
And now I'm eager to know
Posted on Sun, 23 May 2021
And now I'm eager to know what's inside that package...I wait with anticipation.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Tail" 9
What a treasure to read that
Posted on Sat, 22 May 2021
What a treasure to read that a writer has courage and is honest enough to speak up. I hope you've inspired others with this condition to move forward and take control.
I hope your positivity continues and all doubts pass.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Schism: The Final Stretch and Freedom from Agrophobia
Such an engaging poem, full
Posted on Sun, 23 May 2021
Such an engaging poem, full of nature's appeal.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Sun-Light
Wonderful to read and I
Posted on Fri, 21 May 2021
Wonderful to read and I enjoyed the other characters too. Penny the donkey must have her hands full with Dylan and Jessica. I just love how you bring these animals to life.
Cheery read as always.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Baby Love?
Maria's father was certainly
Posted on Fri, 21 May 2021
Maria's father was certainly a busy man, it must have been hard for him to take the criticism on his writing and publishing after all the hard work he put in. I hope his book of poetry did better, his poem on the Slavic people was fascinating to...
Read full commentPosted in Maria's Diary chapters 15 and 16
Hi Rachel,
Posted on Wed, 19 May 2021
Hi Rachel,
I like how you connect with the albatross with each stanza, like you feel an affinity with this bird. It must be so sad not to have at least one photo of yourself as a baby or young child to charge memories.
It's good to...
Read full commentPosted in Wandering Albatross
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