Weefatfella

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I have 49 stories published in 4 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 24337 times and 22 of my stories have been cherry picked.
8 of my 159 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 9 votes

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Paul Hawthorne

I am 62 Years old and have been married to Theresa, the Sweetness for 42 wonderful years. We have two married daughters and have been blessed with four grandchildren. I have two books published on Kindle direct publishing: Weefatfella's Wondrous Weavings and Mair ae Weefatfella's Weavings.

I make a wee shilling from the book sales but I still roll my old black cab out of a morning to ply my trade on the ranks in Livingston West Lothian.

My stories

The Baobab Tree (6)

Opiates and Imaginings.
Cherry

The Baobab Tree (5)

Reflections on the water.

Dwight D Eisenhower's Secret.

Eisenhower is stumped. The German's have broken his radio codes and the Normandy landings are a logistical nightmare. What did he do? Below lies the unbelievable answer.
Cherry

The Baobab Tree (4 )

Love in the moonlight.
Cherry

The Baobab Tree (3)

Busisiwe feels betrayed.

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8 of my comments have received 9 Great Feedback votes

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Hi Michael,

Posted on Sun, 09 Jul 2017

A well constructed and interesting read.

The writing here is excellent.. I've picked out one analogy but there are many this for me is really well done;(But I proceeded. I opened the door and that gorgeous, angelic sunlight which had shone...

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Posted in Fairytales of New York: St. Peter of Brooklyn (or The Trembling Leaves that were my Father's Fists) Part III

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Hi, The Other Terrence Oblong

Posted on Sat, 08 Jul 2017

I'm sure Quinn would have kept his job; he would just have had to take it to the computer, it would have been afraid of the mouse. 

Smile on my old face all the way through.

Weefatfella.

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Posted in Quinn and the elephant

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Hi Ice,

Posted on Fri, 07 Jul 2017

I smiled most of the way through this fantastically constructed brain-fryer.

Well done for God's sake!

Weefatfella.

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Posted in Two Men in Texas

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Awright paborama?

Posted on Wed, 05 Jul 2017

Aye! Poirtolabello, the Napoli o the north.

A hope yir wee taste ae gullshit husnae pit yie aff yir Italiano gelato.

A find a wee wander intae exotic tastes can gie yie an appreciation ae the finer things in life.

Whither...

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Hi TFH.

Posted on Mon, 21 Mar 2016

A very immersive, and stunning tale. I enjoyed the whole piece. The dialogue mixed with the movement in the piece works very well; 

(“You could make an effort,” Jeanie said, fastening the belt of her mauve coat. “I mean, if you had a job...

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Posted in Three cold kisses

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Hi Rhiannonw!

Posted on Thu, 10 Mar 2016

The word play is excellent. Not only does the rhythm catch you. the hook at the end does as well.

There yie are.

Weefatfella.

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Posted in Ensnared

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Hi Terry.

Posted on Tue, 23 Feb 2016

You paint a very vivid picture. The Cathedral, cold and dark. ( shadows shivered
through the panes) The girl lying by the font, the purifying holy water,no help at all.

Unless of course she has been reunited with her lost love....

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So much revealed here. It's

Posted on Fri, 18 Sep 2015

So much revealed here. It's like breaking the code of the masons. 'In A nice way'

The inheritance of womanness.... in the following stanza says so much.

Young girls wondering how theirs will be ... if at all.,

"identity,...

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