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The Baobab Tree (6)
Opiates and Imaginings.
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The Baobab Tree (5)
Reflections on the water.
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Dwight D Eisenhower's Secret.
Eisenhower is stumped. The German's have broken his radio codes and the Normandy landings are a logistical nightmare. What did he do? Below lies the unbelievable answer.
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The Baobab Tree (4 )
Love in the moonlight.
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The Baobab Tree (3)
Busisiwe feels betrayed.
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Hi Michael,
Posted on Sun, 09 Jul 2017
A well constructed and interesting read.
The writing here is excellent.. I've picked out one analogy but there are many this for me is really well done;(But I proceeded. I opened the door and that gorgeous, angelic sunlight which had shone...
Read full commentPosted in Fairytales of New York: St. Peter of Brooklyn (or The Trembling Leaves that were my Father's Fists) Part III
Hi, The Other Terrence Oblong
Posted on Sat, 08 Jul 2017
I'm sure Quinn would have kept his job; he would just have had to take it to the computer, it would have been afraid of the mouse.
Smile on my old face all the way through.
Weefatfella.
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Awright paborama?
Posted on Wed, 05 Jul 2017
Aye! Poirtolabello, the Napoli o the north.
A hope yir wee taste ae gullshit husnae pit yie aff yir Italiano gelato.
A find a wee wander intae exotic tastes can gie yie an appreciation ae the finer things in life.
Whither...
Read full commentPosted in Come on Tae!
Hi TFH.
Posted on Mon, 21 Mar 2016
A very immersive, and stunning tale. I enjoyed the whole piece. The dialogue mixed with the movement in the piece works very well;
(“You could make an effort,” Jeanie said, fastening the belt of her mauve coat. “I mean, if you had a job...
Read full commentPosted in Three cold kisses
Hi Rhiannonw!
Posted on Thu, 10 Mar 2016
The word play is excellent. Not only does the rhythm catch you. the hook at the end does as well.
There yie are.
Weefatfella.
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Hi Terry.
Posted on Tue, 23 Feb 2016
You paint a very vivid picture. The Cathedral, cold and dark. ( shadows shivered
through the panes) The girl lying by the font, the purifying holy water,no help at all.
Unless of course she has been reunited with her lost love....
Read full commentPosted in In An Old Cathedral
So much revealed here. It's
Posted on Fri, 18 Sep 2015
So much revealed here. It's like breaking the code of the masons. 'In A nice way'
The inheritance of womanness.... in the following stanza says so much.
Young girls wondering how theirs will be ... if at all.,
"identity,...
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