Unbelievable, Part One

Poet needs comments on prose before she tears hair out, am I being silly to bother with a novel?! Tell me, rip it apart, I want to be GOOD!

Chapter 2- Home Sweet Home

"Sweetheart, You didn't take a coat? I thought you knew there was going to be a rainstorm. Oh dear, let's get you in some warm clothes. I don't want you to catch something."

the Mourning Breath part2

the second part... it's more of a description of what you see the end result of in part1... yes, there is a Poe reference if you can spot it!

the Mourning Breath part1

yes...just i case you're wondering, I killed myself in this poem...crazy as it may seem, it's a wonderful feeling when you can do that in a "positive" way and share it with people

What a Word's Worth

Short, breaks most rules, so what?

dddk 10 - the terrible adventures of peter pan

barry's got an angle...

Sundown

Sundown - West of Ireland style!

Communication

The mouth can lie, The ears decive, Misinterpreted gestures, And words not recived, But the eyes will never lie.

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