Thanks gletherby. I found it an easy read, but I was waiting for the twist, (being of a mordant temperament), but it never came, it was describing what a care home should be, rather than what some of us have experineced.
A deep poem, that requires several readings. And for me the key is in the title - to allow the letting go; a bit like relaxing ones self, not always easy to do. Dougie
I read this and was a bit puzzled, then realised it was part two, so I read part one. What impressed me was how you brought to life (life? No irony intended), the story of this young woman and her companions. The second part brings it to its...
It has cheered me up no end; and they did say before - cheer up things could be worse; so I cheered up and blow me down - they just got worse! But this will fight off the covid blues - well done!
I enjoy reading this and receive something new each time: I especially liked the last line. With some trepidition may I also query the second line, where you use 'an' instead od 'and'; I wasn't sure if this was deliberate ot a typo?
I liked this Rhiannonw.
Posted on Wed, 08 Feb 2023
I liked this Rhiannonw. Though brief (and no bad thing) it conveys the gfeeling of being in the picture.
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I enjoyed this; so well
Posted on Sat, 28 Jan 2023
I enjoyed this; so well written, with the fine detail adding to the incongruity of the story. Bravo!
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When my time comes, can I please go there?
Posted on Sat, 21 Jan 2023
Thanks gletherby. I found it an easy read, but I was waiting for the twist, (being of a mordant temperament), but it never came, it was describing what a care home should be, rather than what some of us have experineced.
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The Allowing is the key
Posted on Thu, 12 Jan 2023
A deep poem, that requires several readings. And for me the key is in the title - to allow the letting go; a bit like relaxing ones self, not always easy to do. Dougie
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A harrowing story
Posted on Tue, 07 Dec 2021
I read this and was a bit puzzled, then realised it was part two, so I read part one. What impressed me was how you brought to life (life? No irony intended), the story of this young woman and her companions. The second part brings it to its...
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This made my day!
Posted on Tue, 07 Dec 2021
It has cheered me up no end; and they did say before - cheer up things could be worse; so I cheered up and blow me down - they just got worse! But this will fight off the covid blues - well done!
BTW; Marmite vs Vegemite? No contest! As...
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Superlative nature poem
Posted on Wed, 08 Dec 2021
I enjoy reading this and receive something new each time: I especially liked the last line. With some trepidition may I also query the second line, where you use 'an' instead od 'and'; I wasn't sure if this was deliberate ot a typo?
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