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2614 of my comments have received 2679 Great Feedback votes

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Great description of the

Posted on Thu, 07 Aug 2025

Great description of the estate and the interaction between the boys - especially where Dan meets the other two for the first time. I'm enjoying watching this unfolding - keep going Jane!

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Congratulations marandina!

Posted on Wed, 06 Aug 2025

Congratulations marandina! Some wonderful scene setting in this too - it sounds beautiful!

One small thing:

He gropes in his pockets and produces the firelighters.

I'd stick with matches if I were you, otherwise you'll have...

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Breathtakingly beautiful -

Posted on Tue, 05 Aug 2025

Breathtakingly beautiful - please don't delete this one di

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I'm really looking forward to

Posted on Mon, 04 Aug 2025

I'm really looking forward to the photos of Manoushka in her little Leeds United football strip as proof that she's a supporter Turlough?

Thank you very much for this long anticipated diary entry. Like A Year in Provence but with more...

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'.. the pen is mine now.

Posted on Thu, 31 Jul 2025

'.. the pen is mine now.
And I know how to use it.'

Yes you do!

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This is wonderful Jess - the

Posted on Mon, 28 Jul 2025

This is wonderful Jess - the mix of childish den-building and a smart home which quickly morphs into something much darker. Very well done!

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This says so much in so few

Posted on Wed, 16 Jul 2025

This says so much in so few words - congratulations b, very well deserved golden cherries

If you're trying to post from an Android device, the glitch fix is here:

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What marandina says - you

Posted on Thu, 24 Jul 2025

What marandina says - you have a real talent for creating worlds - I'm enjoying this new one - thank you!

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That is one very classy igloo

Posted on Thu, 24 Jul 2025

That is one very classy igloo in the picture. I didn't realise they had little windows like that - maybe it's the 'Famous Author' model?

Looking forward to whatever you (our most distinguished published author) write next, and thank you...

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This is a nicely solid

Posted on Wed, 23 Jul 2025

This is a nicely solid introduction to new characters. A few suggestions below:

deliciously elicit - illicit?

Danielle smiled indifferently before salting away into the lounge area - shrugged indifferently? Or perhaps half-smiled...

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