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Great description of the
Posted on Thu, 07 Aug 2025
Great description of the estate and the interaction between the boys - especially where Dan meets the other two for the first time. I'm enjoying watching this unfolding - keep going Jane!
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Congratulations marandina!
Posted on Wed, 06 Aug 2025
Congratulations marandina! Some wonderful scene setting in this too - it sounds beautiful!
One small thing:
He gropes in his pockets and produces the firelighters.
I'd stick with matches if I were you, otherwise you'll have...
Read full commentPosted in The Last Temptation of Kieran Murphy
Breathtakingly beautiful -
Posted on Tue, 05 Aug 2025
Breathtakingly beautiful - please don't delete this one di
Read full commentPosted in before Floris
I'm really looking forward to
Posted on Mon, 04 Aug 2025
I'm really looking forward to the photos of Manoushka in her little Leeds United football strip as proof that she's a supporter Turlough?
Thank you very much for this long anticipated diary entry. Like A Year in Provence but with more...
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'.. the pen is mine now.
Posted on Thu, 31 Jul 2025
'.. the pen is mine now.
And I know how to use it.'
Yes you do!
Read full commentPosted in A writer, I am becoming.
This is wonderful Jess - the
Posted on Mon, 28 Jul 2025
This is wonderful Jess - the mix of childish den-building and a smart home which quickly morphs into something much darker. Very well done!
Read full commentPosted in The Watchers In The Walls
This says so much in so few
Posted on Wed, 16 Jul 2025
This says so much in so few words - congratulations b, very well deserved golden cherries
If you're trying to post from an Android device, the glitch fix is here:
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What marandina says - you
Posted on Thu, 24 Jul 2025
What marandina says - you have a real talent for creating worlds - I'm enjoying this new one - thank you!
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That is one very classy igloo
Posted on Thu, 24 Jul 2025
That is one very classy igloo in the picture. I didn't realise they had little windows like that - maybe it's the 'Famous Author' model?
Looking forward to whatever you (our most distinguished published author) write next, and thank you...
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This is a nicely solid
Posted on Wed, 23 Jul 2025
This is a nicely solid introduction to new characters. A few suggestions below:
deliciously elicit - illicit?
Danielle smiled indifferently before salting away into the lounge area - shrugged indifferently? Or perhaps half-smiled...
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