in your kiss and on your lips sweet as golden sweat on sunshine in your warmth i found life in your eyes i found home angels’ delight heavens’ height...
William Blake Oh Rose, thou art sick; The invisible worm That flies in the night In the howling storm: Has found out thy bed Of crimson joy; And his...
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this is the sea
Posted on Fri, 30 Jul 2021
Steve I think I understand it but just just out of my reach, a river, flowing into the sea, where all rivers go. As truth, unstoppable and with no other thought. And been trying to learn French but the title is a bit beyond me, "I have slept like...
Pitch black cats with smouldering green eyes were assosiated with witchcaft in the old days, that's probably why they are so scary. This one seems harmless enough. Quiet waters better safe than sorry.
Thanks Jenny it is always good to know that someone appreciates your work we put a lot of trouble effort and time into our writing and of course I mean everyone here at Abc.
And your comments especially are always so kind and positive I...
We can go whithout diamonds and whithout gold, but what would life be whithout Salt? And how can we see whithout light? How can we understand whithout knowledge?
Lovely. Beautiful. Although I do think you should give a stricter age restriction. The pattern of stanzas is rather unusual but I think I can make sense of it, It is has to do with a birth I think.
Fascinating. I've wondered about buying clothes in Covid can you still fit them first? Sounds like could be mission. Do they wash everything again? Pennies? Woolies? Terribly embarassing the story one on homophobia depends on whose who and what...
this is the sea
Posted on Fri, 30 Jul 2021
Steve I think I understand it but just just out of my reach, a river, flowing into the sea, where all rivers go. As truth, unstoppable and with no other thought. And been trying to learn French but the title is a bit beyond me, "I have slept like...
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beautiful weather
Posted on Sun, 01 Aug 2021
Excellent, beautiful message! Yes "God is Love" it says in the Bible I wonder what exactly it means.
We've had lovely weather lately, going for spring.
Have a great week Rhiannon! &
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smouldering green eyes
Posted on Thu, 17 Jun 2021
Pitch black cats with smouldering green eyes were assosiated with witchcaft in the old days, that's probably why they are so scary. This one seems harmless enough. Quiet waters better safe than sorry.
Nolan &
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lyrics
Posted on Tue, 08 Jun 2021
This poetry would do very well for lyrics Patrick you have a beautiful natural flowing rhythm. Same with the rhyme. Story also good. First class.
& Nolan
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effort and time
Posted on Sun, 27 Jun 2021
Thanks Jenny it is always good to know that someone appreciates your work we put a lot of trouble effort and time into our writing and of course I mean everyone here at Abc.
And your comments especially are always so kind and positive I...
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We can go whithout diamonds
Posted on Sun, 20 Jun 2021
We can go whithout diamonds and whithout gold, but what would life be whithout Salt? And how can we see whithout light? How can we understand whithout knowledge?
See you Rhiannon have a great week! & Nolan
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the tongue
Posted on Sun, 06 Jun 2021
Hi Rhiannon! Very true. Yes there are many verses about the tongue it can be a blessing or a curse.
Have a great week! & Nolan
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conception and birth
Posted on Thu, 03 Jun 2021
Lovely. Beautiful. Although I do think you should give a stricter age restriction. The pattern of stanzas is rather unusual but I think I can make sense of it, It is has to do with a birth I think.
This is really very good. Reminds of...
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fascinating
Posted on Sun, 30 May 2021
Fascinating. I've wondered about buying clothes in Covid can you still fit them first? Sounds like could be mission. Do they wash everything again? Pennies? Woolies? Terribly embarassing the story one on homophobia depends on whose who and what...
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a true prophecy
Posted on Thu, 19 Nov 2020
Jesus said He was with us for only a little while but the poor will always be with us. Looks like it, after two thousand years still.
I like your work & Nolan
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