Tom Brown

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My stories

Sprinkler Rainbows

My father was a qualified petrol mechanic but he didn't own one new car in his life. He was very good and was reliable at his work. He had a problem...
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Yesterday I saw a rainbow

Hoping and waiting so terribly long looking searching for ten years there were only occasional glimpses very occasional small fragments. At last, and...

∫ii Legal games

How many legal games of Chess are there? Certainly there is a set consisting of all legal games and a possible position is one that can be reached...

∫i First moves

The perfect game in Chess would be that of the best first move answered by the best move, replied again by best and then the best once more. The age...

Love & Chess

Chess is the ultimate board game but one could easily overdo it. Especially youngsters because the ambition always is to be the best, to be world...

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that good night

Posted on Wed, 28 Feb 2018

Dylan Thomas-

Do not go gentle into that good night. Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

I like your peaceful quiet approach much more. Sounds much more pleasant. One thinks also of Bob Dylan and some Van Morrison. However...

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Mary-Anne I was very pleased to discover these

Posted on Sun, 28 Jan 2018

Mary-Anne I was very  pleased to discover these new poems. Your poetry is really excellent and you always treat the subject matter with sensitivity. These are mostly happy themes often with children and then more serious and sometimes heart-ache...

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Beautiful verse! Reminds me of Narnia!

Posted on Sat, 12 Aug 2017

Beautiful verse! Reminds me of Narnia! The language is pure and has a clarity and happiness. It is interresting that you start with autumn and end with spring and summer.

You must be a born optimist! Tom

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5.7 litre Ford V8

Posted on Mon, 24 Feb 2014

dogho-dogho dogho-dogho dogho-dogho dogho-dogho dogho-dogho

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Yes it's clear now, your poem

Posted on Sat, 16 Sep 2017

Yes it's clear now, your poem describes a birth, a baby, the beginnings of life and later the same, born again and to salvation. Do you have children? I don't, sometimes I think it must be nice they melt your heart. Just being themselves people...

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Posted in First Love

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Please Note!

Posted on Sat, 21 Oct 2017

Please note some facts are not meant as literal, there might also be misunderstandings. Take what you like and leave the rest.

Tom Brown

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Posted in A Mustard Seed and the Kingdom of Heaven

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Something Greater, a Higher Power

Posted on Sat, 30 Sep 2017

Something Greater, a Higher Power, Prime Mover, Creator God call Him/ It/ She what you will. Thanks for the comment! Very sensible, meaningful and sober. Eish! Tom

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Posted in To Exist

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Isn't it amazing

Posted on Wed, 20 Sep 2017

Isn't it amazing how unique a gesture can be? It's like fingerprint.

 

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Posted in The Journey

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People of the sky!

Posted on Sun, 14 May 2017

Children of the sky! A beautiful poem but it could perhaps be rounded off a bit? This really is just my impression, and also I probably can't be specific.

Keep well Mary-Ann! Tom Brown

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Posted in Into The Blue

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Nicotine is a bastard.

Posted on Tue, 19 Sep 2017

Nicotene is a bastard. For most people cold turkey works best. Four months is long you can kick the habit I'm sure.

All the best! Tom

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Posted in Because I can

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