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Cherry

A Disturbing Sleep!

I must learn to read things properly. I read the flash fiction comp as 50 words so here is my 50-word offering. A Disturbing Sleep! Laura opened her...

A Brief Encounter At The Bus Stop! Late IP

A Brief Encounter At The Bus Stop! Late IP 1154 words Laura sat outside in the unexpectedly warm April sunshine drinking her coffee on the patio in...

The Sat Navigator!- 1556 words

The Sat Navigator! - 1556 words This is a two person sketch but there are two other people with one line. Valerie is the Sat Navigator Pat is Jodine...
Cherry

The Embankment! (London)

The Embankment! 632 words Sylvia found a parking space and noted that it was for one hour only with no return. She thought that would be sufficient...

The Jealous Husband

The Jealous Husband! 1280 Words Taken from the Parkinson's 2016 Show. Two men having a telephone conversation The Phone Rings Brian: (Answering phone...

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60 of my comments have received 61 Great Feedback votes

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All of this is so good but

Posted on Wed, 06 Aug 2014

All of this is so good but the very best for me is ' ...she settled with the only company she had ever felt secure in, the running commentary of her mind.'  Loved that and also '...melted into meaningless.'  Wonderful!  Congratulations on a...

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Posted in Dust

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Hello 

Posted on Tue, 18 Aug 2015

Hello 

I did enjoy this. It was a story that sprung from good observation of human nature  because I've been one of  the circling predators , but get qute indignant if someone circles me.

Moya

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Posted in Cáfe Cold War

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Hello Bee,

Posted on Mon, 10 Aug 2015

Hello Bee,

It's so hard to say goodbye.   I know how I feel when I've had a house full and then they all go home.   I wander about the house hating the silence, but I console myself with thinking  about the good time we've all had being...

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Posted in Dear Milly-Mops

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Hello Bee,  

Posted on Fri, 07 Aug 2015

Hello Bee,  

Just read this and the sense of tranquility and quiet reflection really came across to me.  I loved this line

' fine anchored wishes to be moored with just our words'

We need poets like you to show us the world...

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Posted in Hidden in Meaning

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Bee,

Posted on Thu, 16 Jul 2015

Bee,

This is such a lovely expression of your feelings for your kitten.  I found it very moving so much so that it made me cry.  There are so many lines in this that touched me deeply partly because my Lincoln is lying beside me now.  I...

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Posted in Willow

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Dearest Bee,

Posted on Wed, 15 Jul 2015

Dearest Bee,

I have just read this and I can so empathise with you  about the loneliness.  I remember how I felt when I was in pain and told by a not unkind nurse that everything would be alright I would soon get used to wearing  a wee bag...

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Posted in A Lonely Place

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Hello Tina,

Posted on Thu, 09 Jul 2015

Hello Tina,

This is another significant poem to add to your collection.  Beautiful but tragic.  Still you manage to write so well and if the poem concerns your daughter I am always struck by the wistful longing that lies just beneath the...

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Posted in Sweet Daughter Mine

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Hello Tina,

Posted on Tue, 07 Jul 2015

Hello Tina,

So sad when life gets in the way of love. Beautifully expressed as usual.

Moya.

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Posted in 'Just One of those Things'

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Bee,

Posted on Mon, 08 Jun 2015

Bee,

You are pretty wonderful.  I am so glad you will have all your family home to spoil you  and give you comfort.  I think of you often and I hope the outcome is the one that you would choose for yourself.

Moya xx

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Posted in Counting the Hours

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Hello Bee,

Posted on Tue, 02 Jun 2015

Hello Bee,

Vera is right when she speaks of the sensory and emotional experience. I sometimes think the emotional impact is often forgotten by the nursing staff.  I haven't had an MRI scan, but I did have a brain scan and like insert they...

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Posted in Panic Button

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