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Tea and a Belgian Bun! I.P. 1171 Words
Tea and a Belgian Bun! I.P. 1177 Words 'So what did you do with the body?' “That was the first thing I heard as I sipped my tea in the supermarket...
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Flight DCT 13
Flight DCT 13 1592 words - Cobbled together from some old emails Another one from The Parkinson's Players' Revue 'Where Did It All Go Wrong?' Running...
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It's Still Another Day! (I.P.)
It’s Still Another Day! (I.P.) 1478 words The two boys left her for dead, but, unbeknown to them she was still breathing. The lads were no more than...
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Belonging, Loyalty, Freedom and Independence (Late I.P.) 566 words
Belonging, Loyalty, Freedom and Independence (Late I.P.) 566 Words There are many definitions of all four words, but I have taken just one from each...
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The Labour Planet - A Working Title - Part Fourteen - 1147 words
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The Labour Planet – A Working Title – Part Fourteen - 1147 words Seeing Jamie’s reaction all three started to move nearer to the enclosure. ‘Now will...
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Hello Luigi,
Posted on Sat, 01 Mar 2014
Hello Luigi,
This one I especially liked because as a childl I used to go hop picking and i loved it providing no one expected me to pick. I just loved mooching about on the farm as we lived in London.
I love rhyming poetry too...
Read full commentPosted in Southville Hop (I.P.)
Hello Tina,
Posted on Tue, 25 Feb 2014
Hello Tina,
I think this is a poem that speaks of longing for maternal love that is perhaps only realised when the mother is the one in need. But as mothers we ha v e to muddle through as best we can. We get no training and we often...
Read full commentPosted in Your Mother Yourself
Hello again, Cake queen,
Posted on Mon, 24 Feb 2014
Hello again, Cake queen,
Spotted this on Facebook. Hilarious, bloody hilarious! One of the funniest stories I've read on this site. Thoroughly enjoyed.
Moya
Read full commentPosted in Beryl's Fortuitous Advertisement
Hello cakequeen,
Posted on Sun, 12 Jan 2014
Hello cakequeen,
This is a heartfelt poem written with difficulty I should imagine. It guides the reader through the stages of watching someone given 'Tthree Days to Three Weeks to Live.'
I especially liked
'But...
Read full commentPosted in Three Days to Three Weeks.
Linda,
Posted on Tue, 11 Feb 2014
Linda,
This is so good So full of mystery and suspense. I can see the Puddle Pixies opening a detective agency at this rate. Well done on your cherry orchard much deserved.
Moya
Read full commentPosted in WHITHER THOU GOEST 7 - ADRIAN'S STORY PART 1
Hello again,
Posted on Thu, 19 Dec 2013
Hello again,
Another one. So good...tt's frightening to have such talent. In a good way.
Sometimes it is easier
to conjure someone else’s
reality- though,
is a reality conjured
a reality at all? ...
Read full commentPosted in Breathless
Marionella,
Posted on Sun, 08 Dec 2013
Marionella,
You astound me. I cannot for the life of me comprehend a talent such as yours when you are so young.
This poem so simple in structure yet so profound in content.
Congratulations.
Moya
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Joe,
Posted on Mon, 09 Dec 2013
Joe,
You've always been a good story teller but this is something else. This is a flight of fancy that I've never seen in all your other writing. It's as if you've dipped into another box in your imagination and if this is an example of...
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This was a well written piece
Posted on Fri, 22 Nov 2013
This was a well written piece of lost opportunities.
Read full commentPosted in Recycling Day
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