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My stories

Tea and a Belgian Bun! I.P. 1171 Words

Tea and a Belgian Bun! I.P. 1177 Words 'So what did you do with the body?' “That was the first thing I heard as I sipped my tea in the supermarket...

Flight DCT 13

Flight DCT 13 1592 words - Cobbled together from some old emails Another one from The Parkinson's Players' Revue 'Where Did It All Go Wrong?' Running...
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It's Still Another Day! (I.P.)

It’s Still Another Day! (I.P.) 1478 words The two boys left her for dead, but, unbeknown to them she was still breathing. The lads were no more than...

Belonging, Loyalty, Freedom and Independence (Late I.P.) 566 words

Belonging, Loyalty, Freedom and Independence (Late I.P.) 566 Words There are many definitions of all four words, but I have taken just one from each...
Cherry

The Labour Planet - A Working Title - Part Fourteen - 1147 words

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The Labour Planet – A Working Title – Part Fourteen - 1147 words Seeing Jamie’s reaction all three started to move nearer to the enclosure. ‘Now will...

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60 of my comments have received 61 Great Feedback votes

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Hello Luigi,

Posted on Sat, 01 Mar 2014

Hello Luigi,

This one I especially liked because as a childl I used to go hop picking and i loved it providing no one expected me to pick.  I just loved mooching about on the farm as we lived in London.

I love rhyming poetry too...

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Posted in Southville Hop (I.P.)

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Hello Tina,

Posted on Tue, 25 Feb 2014

Hello Tina,

I think this is  a poem that speaks of longing for maternal love  that is perhaps only realised when the mother is the one in  need.   But as mothers we ha v e to muddle through as best we can.  We get no training and we often...

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Posted in Your Mother Yourself

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Hello again, Cake queen,

Posted on Mon, 24 Feb 2014

Hello again, Cake queen,

Spotted this on Facebook.  Hilarious, bloody hilarious!   One of the funniest stories I've read on this site.  Thoroughly enjoyed.

Moya

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Posted in Beryl's Fortuitous Advertisement

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Hello cakequeen,

Posted on Sun, 12 Jan 2014

Hello cakequeen,

This is a heartfelt poem  written with difficulty I should imagine. It guides the reader   through the stages of       watching  someone  given 'Tthree Days to Three Weeks to Live.'

I especially liked

'But...

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Posted in Three Days to Three Weeks.

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Linda,

Posted on Tue, 11 Feb 2014

Linda,

This is so good   So full of mystery and suspense.  I can see the Puddle Pixies opening a detective agency at this rate.  Well done on  your cherry orchard much deserved.

Moya

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Posted in WHITHER THOU GOEST 7 - ADRIAN'S STORY PART 1

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Hello again,

Posted on Thu, 19 Dec 2013

Hello again,

Another one.  So good...tt's frightening to have such talent.  In a good way.

Sometimes it is easier

to conjure someone else’s

reality- though,

is a reality conjured

a reality at all? ...

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Posted in Breathless

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Marionella,

Posted on Sun, 08 Dec 2013

Marionella,

You astound me.  I cannot for the life of  me comprehend a talent such as yours when you are so young. 

This poem so simple in structure yet so profound in content.

Congratulations.

Moya

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Posted in Smoke and Fire

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Joe,

Posted on Mon, 09 Dec 2013

Joe,

You've always been a good story teller but this is something else.  This is a flight of fancy that I've never seen in  all your other writing.  It's as if you've dipped into another box in your imagination and if this is an example of...

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Posted in The Dream Maker

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This was a well written piece

Posted on Fri, 22 Nov 2013

This was a well written piece of lost opportunities.

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Posted in Recycling Day

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