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The Art Critic! 1200 words
The Art Critic! 1200 words The Gallery Proprietor is marked as Prop throughout script The Proprietor is already on stage giving his paintings a bit...
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Parkinson's Awareness Week 2015 547 words
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Parkinson's Awareness Week 2015 It's that time of the year again. Yes, the good old Shakers and Shufflers of which I am one, refuse to be ignored. We...
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It's In His Genes!
It's in his Genes! 1462 Words Woke up this morning feeling fine. Then I remembered. This day my life could change forever. I was frightened by the...
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One Step Ahead! 240 Words
One Step Ahead! 240 Words I woke up with a question on my mind, When did you decide to leave me behind? You agreed that I could be the first to part...
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Life, Love and Laughter!
Life, Love and Laughter! 1212Words I woke up this morning feeling fine not knowing that my life was about to change forever. It started off okay...
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Hello Joe,
Posted on Thu, 03 Jul 2014
Hello Joe,
I'm so pleased you haven't given up on Trains. It is an excellent story which I was really enjoying.. See, I've even got a good memory but I think I said before that I thought Trains was even better than Missing and you know...
Read full commentPosted in Welcome To England
Hello Richard,
Posted on Fri, 18 Apr 2014
Hello Richard,
The postman is your crusader but in today's society, he would be the one hauled up in court even without the toast incident. This is a really good story that held me riveted right to the end, but I wanted the end to be...
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Great poem Elsie. I well
Posted on Mon, 26 May 2014
Great poem Elsie. I well remember when one of my girls went off to Uni. I felt I was losing a daughter and gaining a haversack of grey better known as student white washing.
MOya
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This is a fantastic piece
Posted on Tue, 10 Jun 2014
This is a fantastic piece that expresses your anger at the double standards so ruthlessly applied to women. No, not even women, just girls who have been raped and are therefore blameless. I think all religions are divisive because all teach...
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Hello Bee,
Posted on Tue, 27 May 2014
Hello Bee,
Another great poem from you. Your poems always make me think They are so subtle and I love mulling over the way your words are chosen and arranged as with the last line of each stanza turning the previous lines on their head...
Read full commentPosted in A Glass of Water
Hello,
Posted on Thu, 24 Apr 2014
Hello,
Really enjoyed your story and a good lead into your longer story.
Moya
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Tina,
Posted on Tue, 08 Apr 2014
Tina,
This is great. I don't know how I missed it. You have summed up the daily frustrations so well. Checkouts can be the very devil. I don't know if it was you who told me of a person with Parkinson's who was getting some...
Read full commentPosted in When Barry Met Larry
Hello Bee,
Posted on Wed, 19 Mar 2014
Hello Bee,
I thought this was a really clever take on a serious subject. Witty yet thought provoking and I thought the use of repetition was effective as it brought the reader sharply back to the problem just in case they were lured into...
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Linda,
Posted on Sun, 16 Mar 2014
Linda,
I too love the humour in this and also think the photo is great. Sixty four eh! Well it's only a number and as I've often said before it's a well known medical fact that the more birthdays one has the longer one lives.
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Hello,
Posted on Fri, 07 Mar 2014
Hello,
Yes I found this poem intriguing and thought provoking.
Moya
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