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The Art Critic! 1200 words

By Denzella on Sun, 24 May 2015

The Art Critic! 1200 words The Gallery Proprietor is marked as Prop throughout script The Proprietor is already on stage giving his paintings a bit...
Story
Certificate PG
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Parkinson's Awareness Week 2015 547 words

By Denzella on Thu, 23 Apr 2015

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Parkinson's Awareness Week 2015 It's that time of the year again. Yes, the good old Shakers and Shufflers of which I am one, refuse to be ignored. We...
Autobiography
Story
Certificate U
Cherry

It's In His Genes!

By Denzella on Sat, 21 Mar 2015

It's in his Genes! 1462 Words Woke up this morning feeling fine. Then I remembered. This day my life could change forever. I was frightened by the...
Other Fiction
Story
Certificate PG
Cherry

One Step Ahead! 240 Words

By Denzella on Thu, 19 Mar 2015

One Step Ahead! 240 Words I woke up with a question on my mind, When did you decide to leave me behind? You agreed that I could be the first to part...
Love
Poem
Certificate PG
Cherry

Life, Love and Laughter!

By Denzella on Mon, 16 Mar 2015

Life, Love and Laughter! 1212Words I woke up this morning feeling fine not knowing that my life was about to change forever. It started off okay...
Love
Non-fiction
Certificate 12

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Hello Joe,

Posted on Thu, 03 Jul 2014

Hello Joe,

I'm so pleased you haven't given up on Trains.  It is an excellent story which I was really enjoying..  See,  I've even got a good memory but I think I said before that I thought Trains was even better than Missing and you know...

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Hello  Richard,

Posted on Fri, 18 Apr 2014

Hello  Richard,

The postman is your crusader but in today's society, he would be the one hauled up in court even without the toast incident.  This is a really good story that held me riveted right to the end,  but I wanted the end to be...

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Posted in The postman

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Great poem Elsie.  I well

Posted on Mon, 26 May 2014

Great poem Elsie.  I well remember when one of my girls went off to Uni.  I felt I was losing a daughter and gaining a haversack of grey better known as student white washing. 

MOya

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Posted in Love - Jess' bag, morning after

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This is a fantastic piece

Posted on Tue, 10 Jun 2014

This is a fantastic piece that expresses your anger at the double standards so ruthlessly applied to women.  No, not even women, just girls who have been raped and are therefore blameless.  I think all religions are divisive because all teach...

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Posted in Crime and Punishment

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Hello Bee,

Posted on Tue, 27 May 2014

Hello Bee,

Another great poem from you.  Your poems always make me think They are so subtle and  I love mulling over the way your words are  chosen and arranged as with the last line of each stanza turning the previous lines on their head...

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Posted in A Glass of Water

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Hello,

Posted on Thu, 24 Apr 2014

Hello,

Really enjoyed your story and a good lead into your longer story.

Moya

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Posted in Class warfare, 1916

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Tina,

Posted on Tue, 08 Apr 2014

Tina,

This is great.  I don't know how I missed it.  You have summed up the daily  frustrations so well.  Checkouts can be the very devil.  I don't know if it was you who told me of  a person with Parkinson's  who was getting some...

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Posted in When Barry Met Larry

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Hello Bee,

Posted on Wed, 19 Mar 2014

Hello Bee,

I thought this was a really clever take on a serious subject.  Witty yet thought provoking and I thought the use of repetition was effective as it brought the reader sharply back to the problem just in case they were lured into...

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Posted in Out of the Mouths of Babes

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Linda,

Posted on Sun, 16 Mar 2014

Linda,

I too love the humour in this and also think the photo is great.  Sixty four eh!  Well it's only a number and as I've often said before it's a well known medical fact that the more birthdays one has the longer one lives.

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Posted in NOW I'M SIXTY-FOUR

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Hello,

Posted on Fri, 07 Mar 2014

Hello,

Yes I found this poem intriguing and thought provoking.

Moya

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Posted in The Lady in Red

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